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    A different interpretation of the normal sunrise


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    Really like to hear some comments about this shot.

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    Hmm maybe you should have de-noised it, and perhaps had something which casts a long shadow so that the "sunrise" would be more obvious.


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    Hmm... that's some food for thought. Thanks!

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    A human interest in it would be perfect. As it is now, it still looks very nice but lack a little bit of something...

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    Originally posted by jasphotography
    A human interest in it would be perfect. As it is now, it still looks very nice but lack a little bit of something...
    Hmm ... what is lacking?? Maybe a interesting subject is not present here.

    Anyway, I can't think of any human interest that can be added. Can you give me some idea jas?

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    Originally posted by wormz777
    Hmm ... what is lacking?? Maybe a interesting subject is not present here.

    Anyway, I can't think of any human interest that can be added. Can you give me some idea jas?
    human interest as in HUMAN ourselves. They called it "REN"

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    Originally posted by jasphotography
    human interest as in HUMAN ourselves. They called it "REN"
    Aiyo .. of course I know that!! but I can't think of how a human subject in this picture can enhance the mood or the composition.

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    Originally posted by wormz777
    Aiyo .. of course I know that!! but I can't think of how a human subject in this picture can enhance the mood or the composition.
    Use your imagination! I don't have to teach you how to imagine right???

    Ok, anyway... let us try to imagine this for you... How about a man in silhouette walking either towards or away from you in one of the catchlight areas?

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    Exposure could be a little longer 'coz it does seem a tad too dark for me. Additionally, the noisy regions are distracting me a little as well.

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    Originally posted by jasphotography
    Use your imagination! I don't have to teach you how to imagine right???

    Ok, anyway... let us try to imagine this for you... How about a man in silhouette walking either towards or away from you in one of the catchlight areas?
    OMG that's a brilliant idea!

    However, I would have to use another title, but tt's a non-issue. Oh man ... You are the best man..

    Shall I do some ps?

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    Originally posted by imaginary_number
    Exposure could be a little longer 'coz it does seem a tad too dark for me. Additionally, the noisy regions are distracting me a little as well.
    Point noted. Actually I feel the exposure is alright as it portrays the mood which I want to convey. Maybe After I ps the shot, I will try to remove the noise

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