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Old 8th May 2007   #1
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Picture was taken in Lori Loft of Jurong Birdpark. I wanted to show interaction between the two birds, rather than taking shots of single birds flying or sitting around.

One thing I do not like about this shot is that the birds are very much photographer-aware. But these birds can be hardly called shy and easily interact with the visitors. So it was a challenge not to attract their attention while not having the right lens or camera and, hence, having to shoot from a rather close distance.

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Old 8th May 2007   #2
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Nice shot, except the background is way too busy and cluttered. If you wre able to open up the apeture more, you would have a winner here.
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Old 8th May 2007   #3
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Originally Posted by Deadpoet View Post
Nice shot, except the background is way too busy and cluttered. If you wre able to open up the apeture more, you would have a winner here.
I think that's a bit hard for him. From his signature can see that he was using a compact. Hard to get shallower DOF.

Well, limitations of a compact camera, but work ard that and shoot more man!

Btw, love the colours!
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Old 8th May 2007   #4
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Looks kinda over saturated?
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Old 8th May 2007   #5
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Since background is cluttered and the compact makes it difficult to achieve shallow DOF, why not get closer to the subject to reduce the clutter?
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Old 8th May 2007   #6
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Post processing may still save the shot... do some selection with a lil feathering and then blur out the rest of the BG.... it can help...
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Old 8th May 2007   #7
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Originally Posted by yehosaphat View Post
Looks kinda over saturated?
Compare to the original. Too much of Photoshop processing?

Original:


Post-processed (same as in the first post):
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Old 9th May 2007   #8
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just a little over-pp.

but i think ok, depends on whether u are processing it for web or print.

i would suggest a tighter crop, or blurred background.
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