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Join Date: Mar 2005
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Picture was taken in Lori Loft of Jurong Birdpark. I wanted to show interaction between the two birds, rather than taking shots of single birds flying or sitting around.
One thing I do not like about this shot is that the birds are very much photographer-aware. But these birds can be hardly called shy and easily interact with the visitors. So it was a challenge not to attract their attention while not having the right lens or camera and, hence, having to shoot from a rather close distance. ![]()
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Join Date: Oct 2004
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Nice shot, except the background is way too busy and cluttered. If you wre able to open up the apeture more, you would have a winner here.
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Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Tanah Merah
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Well, limitations of a compact camera, but work ard that and shoot more man! Btw, love the colours! |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: North
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Looks kinda over saturated?
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Join Date: Apr 2007
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Since background is cluttered and the compact makes it difficult to achieve shallow DOF, why not get closer to the subject to reduce the clutter?
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Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: East
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Post processing may still save the shot... do some selection with a lil feathering and then blur out the rest of the BG.... it can help...
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Join Date: Mar 2005
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Compare to the original. Too much of Photoshop processing?
Original: ![]() Post-processed (same as in the first post): ![]()
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Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: west side!
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just a little over-pp.
but i think ok, depends on whether u are processing it for web or print. i would suggest a tighter crop, or blurred background. |
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