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Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 147
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![]() Hi all. This shot was presented in b&w to show n contrast the shadows,gradient n different textures in the picture. Feel free to comment ![]() |
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Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: singapore
Posts: 1,707
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tweak the contrast and the image will 'pop out' more.
i'd recommend you experiment with a telephoto lense next time. capture the grill swirls and little else, or even just capture the shadow, keep it simple! ps. thanks eikin Last edited by foxtwo; 7th May 2007 at 12:43 AM. |
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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Woodlands
Posts: 706
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stronger contrast will help. But you got to look our for the composition as well. You set the focus into the distance. Close objects are blurred, however the blurred grill in the front starts to dominate the photo, the in-focus part in the back is small and lost. you want to use out-of-focuse to emphasize in focus parts and not drown them...
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Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: west side!
Posts: 685
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not much of a composition, relating to ur desc.
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Senior Member
Join Date: May 2006
Location: In God's Top Ten
Posts: 2,249
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Reshoot this piece. Try different angles and focus points. As with Michael's suggestion, I might have focused on a closer part of the grill.
B&W especially for objects and shapes needs some strong contrast to bring out the best in the photo. Is this shot in digital colour then converted? Or in-cam b&w mode? Whichever is the case, some post-processing work is needed (dodge and burn, curves, etc.)
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Join Date: Mar 2007
Posts: 147
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tkns to all for all ur comments..haha..yup..itz shot in digital n converted to B&W...shall go try n c how it can be improved
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