5th May 2007, 09:50 PM
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Not much. I was just practicing my composition technique.
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I was walking around the back alley in Chinatown, and the rusty color caught my attention.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Rust resembles a decaying/ageing process, but against this background it can look quite pretty. I did adjust the color using Sadie tool in Bibble Pro to accentuate the rust against grey background.
TIA for the c&c.
The picture itself:
6th May 2007, 01:48 AM
the rust looks colored in. odd coloration
being ur title is rusty, maybe an idea would be to make the pipes rusty too.
other wise, the composition seems very open, a tight crop would be nice.
if this pic is one of a series, then makes sense. by itself, dun really bring out the rusty title