![]() |
|
|||||||
| Notices |
| Critique Corner Post your image in here to get serious and honest feedback from fellow photographers. Please read FAQ before posting. |
|
|
|
|
Thread Tools |
|
|
#1 |
|
Member
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 425
|
1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition 2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work? Not much. I was just practicing my composition technique. 3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions) I was walking around the back alley in Chinatown, and the rusty color caught my attention. 4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture Rust resembles a decaying/ageing process, but against this background it can look quite pretty. I did adjust the color using Sadie tool in Bibble Pro to accentuate the rust against grey background. TIA for the c&c. The picture itself: ![]() |
|
|
|
|
#2 |
|
Member
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: west side!
Posts: 685
|
the rust looks colored in. odd coloration
being ur title is rusty, maybe an idea would be to make the pipes rusty too. other wise, the composition seems very open, a tight crop would be nice. if this pic is one of a series, then makes sense. by itself, dun really bring out the rusty title |
|
|
![]() |
| Bookmarks |
| Thread Tools | |
|