The Mask

Canonised · 22nd April 2007

Went on the last day of the exhibition, took an image of the Mask ..... thick glass reflection, and poor lighting... PS and try out a dummy post card .... plse C & C ...thanks.

Chris Lim · 22nd April 2007

Not a critic but just share what i think i might know and make sense of.

In the old days where statues as such are built, its artform is very much derived from symmetry. I figured based on the perspective of this image presented that you had various restrictions in your compositing of the subject. I cant really comment further cos i really dunno in which area you are presenting this piece for comments.

As a post card i think the essense of the symmetry needs to be there. thats about as much as you can do subject wise.

Hope my comments makes a little sense and helps in someways. =)

tribal.snake · 23rd April 2007

ur mask is tilted.
overall as a postcard, not bad.
watch the unused space, no balance.

ortega · 23rd April 2007

image of mask is nice, like the lighting
but composition of postcard and choice of font could be better

eg: below

22nd April 2007	#1
Canonised Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Posts: 2,511	The Mask Went on the last day of the exhibition, took an image of the Mask ..... thick glass reflection, and poor lighting... PS and try out a dummy post card .... plse C & C ...thanks. __________________ always the Light, .... always.

22nd April 2007	#2
Chris Lim Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 3,107	Re: The Mask Not a critic but just share what i think i might know and make sense of. In the old days where statues as such are built, its artform is very much derived from symmetry. I figured based on the perspective of this image presented that you had various restrictions in your compositing of the subject. I cant really comment further cos i really dunno in which area you are presenting this piece for comments. As a post card i think the essense of the symmetry needs to be there. thats about as much as you can do subject wise. Hope my comments makes a little sense and helps in someways. =) __________________ email: Chris@CoffeestainsPhotography.com Website: CoffeestainsPhotography

23rd April 2007	#3
tribal.snake Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: west side! Posts: 686	Re: The Mask ur mask is tilted. overall as a postcard, not bad. watch the unused space, no balance.

23rd April 2007	#4
ortega Moderator Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: NorthEast Posts: 16,938	Re: The Mask image of mask is nice, like the lighting but composition of postcard and choice of font could be better eg: below __________________ The Law