Delinquent?

SniperD · 16th March 2003

Taken with Canon EOS D60 with EF 17-35L
f2.8 (aperture priority)
ISO 400 (Flash WB)
Exposure compensation of +0.3EV

Comments are greatly appreciated

Freed · 16th March 2003

I feel that the slant is a little overdone, and the cropping of the forehead is also too much.

But I supposed some shots didn't allow much time to really compose.

StreetShooter · 16th March 2003

D60? Time to update your signature.

denizenx · 16th March 2003

too much table on the lower side?
think key is reflection face and the emptiness behind OR the ashtray?
haha or just crop an Xpan shot...

lavenderlilz · 16th March 2003

too much space left behind the guy.

Mystix · 16th March 2003

u know the model? careful of ur title.

SniperD · 16th March 2003

Streetshooter - Heehee... borrowed a D60 from a good friend ^.^

Thanks guys for the comments, this shot was taken from the waist area so din see it from the viewfinder. Yupz, the forehead was cropped off too much and the foreground is just too much.. will improve on stealth shooting.

Mystic - dun worry, he's my friend

16th March 2003	#1
SniperD Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Behind the viewfinder... Posts: 5,954	Delinquent? Taken with Canon EOS D60 with EF 17-35L f2.8 (aperture priority) ISO 400 (Flash WB) Exposure compensation of +0.3EV Comments are greatly appreciated __________________ EYE-DEAS

16th March 2003	#4
denizenx Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: L2TPYSG Posts: 4,514	too much table on the lower side? think key is reflection face and the emptiness behind OR the ashtray? haha or just crop an Xpan shot... __________________ "I'm... dreaming... of a wide... angle~ Just like the ones I used to know~"

16th March 2003	#7
SniperD Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Behind the viewfinder... Posts: 5,954	Streetshooter - Heehee... borrowed a D60 from a good friend ^.^ Thanks guys for the comments, this shot was taken from the waist area so din see it from the viewfinder. Yupz, the forehead was cropped off too much and the foreground is just too much.. will improve on stealth shooting. Mystic - dun worry, he's my friend __________________ EYE-DEAS

16th March 2003	#2
Freed Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Northern Singapore Posts: 303	I feel that the slant is a little overdone, and the cropping of the forehead is also too much. But I supposed some shots didn't allow much time to really compose.

16th March 2003	#3
StreetShooter Moderator Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Katong Posts: 4,702	D60? Time to update your signature.

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lavenderlilz Member Join Date: Jun 2002 Location: hErE lAh Posts: 1,058	too much space left behind the guy.

16th March 2003	#6
Mystix Member Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Planet Earth Posts: 645	u know the model? careful of ur title.