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![]() image has been crop (top, left and bottom) Canon EOS 30D Sigma 70-300mm at 149mm 30 Seconds f/8 ISO 100 |
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Interesting idea and concept capturing the trails of light on the Aircraft.
But a pity the focusing look out. Just wondering, did you face any issue with the security?
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I think not lar... TS should be standing at the traffic juntion turning into Tanah Merah Coast Rd. Just leave the tripod with the cam on, release the shutter, and find a place to "hide". After 30s, walk back to collect Cam loh...
Unidentified Camera on Tripod not as bad as Unidentified Bagage...Actually, if you guys go on Sundays, usually lesser vehicles around there. And you may have the occasional police cars driving by. I'm sure our friendly neighbourhood policeman will accept our explanation that we're die-hard photographers who are very interested in planes... ![]() Like the Light trails
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No issue with security. I was on the left side of 02C. |
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Just some thought for discussion, maybe a slight shorter focal length (shoot wider) and small aperture might help with the focusing. Thanks for sharing.
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I think it's resized quite badly, too many jaggies. Could have left the lamp post out of the shot. Tungsten lighting will create a strong cast on the overall picture and just dampens the overall impact of the shot. It does work at times but I don't think it did this time. A poorly composed image, imo.
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Technically, I don't think this is a very good shot either. Too much motion blur and way too soft for my liking.
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It was already on manual focus.
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Personally, I would be embarassed to show an image that is so full of jaggies due to a poor crop and resize. Bulb exposures on a digital sensor will very likely yield dead pixels... and the difference between dust and dead pixels is quite visually apparent. |
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No one is perfect and everyone is learning.
I feel that Threadstarter already done what he could and share with the rest some interesting concept of capturing aicraft light trails. Technically and composition-wise, there are rooms for improvement. Before clicking that "Submit Thread/Reply" button, I hope that viewers can understand where is the Threadstarter coming from and similarly I hope that TS can understand some of the suggestions that is proposed by other viewers so that there can be improvement. Please be reminded to maintain a constructive and friendly discussion here in this sub-forum. Comments that are uncalled for will be reported to moderators for appropriate action. Let us keep CS a friendly place for photographers and hobbyists to discuss and learn. Thank you.
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thanks for the encouragement.
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Hi jeromevo,
You are Welcome. Learn what is wrong this time or analyse how you can further improve on this shot, keep trying and experimenting and I believe you will get what you want. No one is born with great skills, but everyone has to start somewhere. Take some of the comments with a pinch of salt once a while and don't be discourage. Keep shooting and enjoy photography, that is what is all about. Cheerz.
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hmm.. hello ma****'s friend. i'm sure you went with some photog teacher during this outing and should have pointed this out to you. but no worries photog is a continuous learning experience.
focusing with the sigma can be a pain in the ass some times. so in these kinda conditions, i suggues that u try to lock your focus on the lamp post. seeing that your cam is the 30d, and shooting at manual the pics should turn out great. maybe you should try shooting at f16/18 and the exposure will be nice. but thats my opinion. but honestly, this shot didnt grasp me the moment i saw it. first impressions were that the lines were jaggy and lighting from the lampost was abit too harsh for this shot. but oh well.. you can always improve.. hope to see more shots from you
the only time the police stopped us was because we were walking 5 abreast on the road. talked **** with him for a while and he let us go... CHEERS! |
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