I miss her...

Pokka · 11th March 2003

The distracting background which I couldnt do anything about.

The gap at the bench.

I would have preferred it to be a long bench so that there is no gap there. The empty space on the right...it kinda gives a more 'lonely' approach to the picture.

The cropped shoes

heh, was under influence of alcohol already. Mind cannot work properly.

Other than those nitpicks, does the pic work for you? As in, gives the impression that the guy is missing a girl badly? Do give me your honest comments. Your comments make my next pic a better one! Keep shooting!

PS:Pic posted with permission from owner.

Linkster · 11th March 2003

how about B&W?

Pokka · 11th March 2003

Hmm, indeed... it gives a different perspective to the picture.

togu · 11th March 2003

Personal preference, I'll use sepia and some softening instead. Looks too sharp to have the mood.

11th March 2003	#1
Pokka Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,354	I miss her... The distracting background which I couldnt do anything about. The gap at the bench. I would have preferred it to be a long bench so that there is no gap there. The empty space on the right...it kinda gives a more 'lonely' approach to the picture. The cropped shoes heh, was under influence of alcohol already. Mind cannot work properly. Other than those nitpicks, does the pic work for you? As in, gives the impression that the guy is missing a girl badly? Do give me your honest comments. Your comments make my next pic a better one! Keep shooting! PS:Pic posted with permission from owner. __________________ My online photo gallery!

11th March 2003	#3
Pokka Member Join Date: Aug 2002 Posts: 1,354	Hmm, indeed... it gives a different perspective to the picture. __________________ My online photo gallery!

11th March 2003	#2
Linkster Member Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Membina Court Posts: 499	how about B&W?

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togu Moderator Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: ToFusland Posts: 5,563	Personal preference, I'll use sepia and some softening instead. Looks too sharp to have the mood.