Carpe Diem

romeobravo · 8th March 2003

Taken this shot in Chijmes. The old man is ready to seize the day and go home. Comments are welcome. Film used: Ilford HP5

romeobravo · 8th March 2003

no response?

come on lah... need to know what's your comment on my pic. if you think it's bad, just tell me, i don't mind

StreetShooter · 8th March 2003

It works, even without the caption. In fact, would probably work even better if left open to interpretation.

There's a purple cast which is unpleasing. And I would crop off the bottom a little bit. But it's an evocative picture, and that's what counts.

Learn to get a little closer to your subjects, though.

8th March 2003	#1
romeobravo Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 193	Carpe Diem Taken this shot in Chijmes. The old man is ready to seize the day and go home. Comments are welcome. Film used: Ilford HP5

8th March 2003	#2
romeobravo Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 193	no response? come on lah... need to know what's your comment on my pic. if you think it's bad, just tell me, i don't mind

8th March 2003	#3
StreetShooter Moderator Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Katong Posts: 4,702	It works, even without the caption. In fact, would probably work even better if left open to interpretation. There's a purple cast which is unpleasing. And I would crop off the bottom a little bit. But it's an evocative picture, and that's what counts. Learn to get a little closer to your subjects, though.