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    Default Ray of light

    Captured the Sun behind the clouds during mid-day on a boat. A couple in the picture is intended to add some "flavor" to the picture.

    Exposed for highlights.



    C&C greatly appreciated.

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    The couple of heads is quite disconcerting. Either you do without them altogether or you include more of them.

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    love the rays bursting from behind and beneath the clouds! it's almost biblical. same thing, the heads are tad distracting.

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    the black mass on left is unbalancing, too heavy: I would rather just have the sky alone. the people silhouette may help to balance but as it is, too insignificant and too close to the centre.

    I dunno if this is a crop version, which I suspect is not, and therefore there is no more room for other compositions. And also I do not know if u have other shots as the boat moves along changing the perspective.

    Overall I think it needs a new perspective altogether. The great light in the skies can't save this pic.

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    Thanks for the critique guys. Greatly appreciate it.

    Too bad, I didn't have other better perspectives because the island on our right and the sun/clouds were behind and our boat was going in one direction.

    Will this do?

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    oh yah .....
    this one is much better.
    looks more comfortable

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kit View Post
    The couple of heads is quite disconcerting. Either you do without them altogether or you include more of them.
    I agree..

    Either have the full thing
    Or just leave out the heads.. Two heads floating there is pretty disturbing.. =D

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    think u recrop is even less than the first ... question: why didnt u take more than one shot?

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