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Old 9th February 2007   #1
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Default Sleeping teddy

Need critical critiques ... Pic is way underexposed i realised.
Need more info help on the settings.

using : f4, 1/6,
already using flash at 1/16, iso 800


using nikkor 35-80 1:4-5.6D
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Old 9th February 2007   #2
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did u use a tripod? looks a slight blur to mi. maybe u should try to reorganize the background? it's a little distracting
maybe u can describe wat kind of look u are going for?
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Old 9th February 2007   #3
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under? could be over, def not under
extremely messy
machiam snapshot, no offense meant
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Old 9th February 2007   #4
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Default Re: Sleeping teddy

Pic was taken in sis's room :P with her teddy bear..

yes can say more of snapshot..
I was just trying out my new d50(just got it yesterday 2nd hand) and found the teddy under the blanket so just took a snap out of it. took about 15shots and found this the closest to what i have..

seems didnt manage to get the "cute" effect
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Focus point seem off..unless you wanted to focus around the ribbon-blanket area..
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Old 11th February 2007   #6
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teddies don't sleep. they are not alive.
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Old 11th February 2007   #7
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Originally Posted by deckard View Post
teddies don't sleep. they are not alive.
He not sleeping but posing for the camera.
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