Blue eye

blacvios · 9th February 2007

Comments appreciated

espion · 9th February 2007

great photo opp, but you did not make best use of it I think, eg the amount of space and distraction on the left. Maybe if you have taken two steps to your left, you could have a better composition with the other circular thing in the bkgd as an echo. Or to go in close and focus on the blue eye and the ice to capture textural contrasts ... etc etc

blacvios · 9th February 2007

Originally Posted by espion

great photo opp, but you did not make best use of it I think, eg the amount of space and distraction on the left. Maybe if you have taken two steps to your left, you could have a better composition with the other circular thing in the bkgd as an echo. Or to go in close and focus on the blue eye and the ice to capture textural contrasts ... etc etc

Thanks for your kind comments, appreciated. Will bare in mind, i know i was too greedy. Trying to get more depth from the photograph by standing more to the right so that the eye will stand out more.

Rashkae · 9th February 2007

Also, lots of overblown highlights, heavy distortion and chromatic abberration.

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espion Deregistered Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,533	Re: Blue eye great photo opp, but you did not make best use of it I think, eg the amount of space and distraction on the left. Maybe if you have taken two steps to your left, you could have a better composition with the other circular thing in the bkgd as an echo. Or to go in close and focus on the blue eye and the ice to capture textural contrasts ... etc etc

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Rashkae Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 8,284	Re: Blue eye Also, lots of overblown highlights, heavy distortion and chromatic abberration.