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I saw this gal on the street and find that she is photogenic....so I took a shot of her..
Please give me our comments, including the PP. Thanks. ![]() |
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her cheek looks patchy to me! =/
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I think it is good.
But as the colours are rather muted maybe do a highkey B&W conversion to add more drama to it. And finish off with a diffused focus effect to cut off some of the background distractions. She's surely a beauty and the picture begs us to see more of her face frontally. For that nothing can be done in this picture. |
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looks like a real life doll.
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Thanks espion for your kind comment.
Ok, good suggestion....I was playing with the PP and find that its looks good when converted to colour pencil too. Will try BW. |
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![]() Here's what I understand by diffused focus. Or otherwise indicated by my Hoya "diffused focus" filter. And Mr espion, if you do have any queries with my english, please do not hesisate to contact Hoya for more details. =D On to the picture, I think it looks absolutely lovely, and the colors are fine. |
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Mini j lo!
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Hi XiaoMiaoWang, may be espion meant to blur the background more.
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Thank you miniUltraman,
The setting is f8, 1/100s, 60mm, taken with D80 kit. BTW I did some PP ... Last edited by lastboltnut; 12th February 2007 at 10:01 AM. |
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Any more comments?? Thanks!
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i like her tresses and eyes! beautiful!
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