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Old 6th February 2007   #1
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Night shot taken at Punggol jetty using self-timer.
Newbie here so feel free to comment on anything which could've made this a better photo and me a better photographer.
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Old 6th February 2007   #2
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Default Re: Punggol Fishermen

Originally Posted by khairil View Post
Night shot taken at Punggol jetty using self-timer.
Newbie here so feel free to comment on anything which could've made this a better photo and me a better photographer.
Fire away!

Nothing adverse khairil,

Just a nice shot.

Exposure looks good.

The photo doesn't capture me, but it is well taken.
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Hi, I think the subject matter here will not lead to a fantastic shot, but I am thinking .....maybe a wider angle including more of the night sky .....stooping down to your smallest aperture to lengthen the time.....but get you something better....
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IMHO, should have placed the fishermen in lower left intersection of Rule of Thirds
plus a tighter framing would have been better...
72mm zoom is ur limit?
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IMHO, should have placed the fishermen in lower left intersection of Rule of Thirds
plus a tighter framing would have been better...
72mm zoom is ur limit?
Hi there,

Thanks for the tip!...120mm was my limit by the way...will keep ur comments in mind
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Old 6th February 2007   #6
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Brudda, think Centre Of Interest, the anchor point of your pics...
Well, set up a photosite and get fellow photographers to critique =)
I don't mind =)

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Default Re: Punggol Fishermen

Originally Posted by khairil View Post
Night shot taken at Punggol jetty using self-timer.
Newbie here so feel free to comment on anything which could've made this a better photo and me a better photographer.
Fire away!

it is a very nice place at night.
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Old 8th February 2007   #8
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technically i find it acceptable. but the photo does not say anything by itself. how about u go to them, chat with them, and when they're comfy u can actually do a photoessay while they wait for the fish to bite?
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Old 8th February 2007   #9
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technically i find it acceptable. but the photo does not say anything by itself. how about u go to them, chat with them, and when they're comfy u can actually do a photoessay while they wait for the fish to bite?
WOW...I never thought of that. That's a really good idea! Perhaps, they would even be willing to strike a pose or two for me LOL. Thanks djork, i really appreciate ur input.
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The big question in the picture is: So? So what about fisherman fishing in industrial waters? Are you trying to say anything?
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