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Join Date: Dec 2006
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Night shot taken at Punggol jetty using self-timer.
Newbie here so feel free to comment on anything which could've made this a better photo and me a better photographer. Fire away! ![]() |
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Blue/Green Planet
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Just a nice shot. Exposure looks good. The photo doesn't capture me, but it is well taken.
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: Little Red Dot
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Hi, I think the subject matter here will not lead to a fantastic shot, but I am thinking .....maybe a wider angle including more of the night sky .....stooping down to your smallest aperture to lengthen the time.....but get you something better....
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Bukit Batok
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IMHO, should have placed the fishermen in lower left intersection of Rule of Thirds
plus a tighter framing would have been better... 72mm zoom is ur limit? |
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Join Date: Dec 2006
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Bukit Batok
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Brudda, think Centre Of Interest, the anchor point of your pics...
Well, set up a photosite and get fellow photographers to critique =) I don't mind =) Well Shoot more, Learn more Happy Shooting ^^ |
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Raffles Place
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Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: Hong Kong, Pokfulam
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technically i find it acceptable. but the photo does not say anything by itself. how about u go to them, chat with them, and when they're comfy u can actually do a photoessay while they wait for the fish to bite?
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Join Date: Dec 2006
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Thanks djork, i really appreciate ur input. |
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Join Date: Aug 2005
Posts: 1,533
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The big question in the picture is: So? So what about fisherman fishing in industrial waters? Are you trying to say anything?
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