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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Hougang
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Join Date: Jan 2002
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Definitely eye-catching.
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: 東京 Tokyo
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the proportioning of the spaces is pleasing. by blurring the boundaries of the picture, the vignette helps to 'expand' the spaces at the sides as well and put the viewer's focus on the subject
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Hougang
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actually the vignette is by the 8mm fisheye.. thanks for the comments so far.. that was fast..
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Location: Hougang
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does the blur look fake to you? quite new to PS..
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Join Date: Sep 2004
Location: Blue/Green Planet
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Hi,
I quite like it. Well done
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Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Yishun
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i LIKE!!!!! damn nice!! ... really captivating, good use of space and proves that rules are ment to be broken by those who can! ..
clearly shows that the rule of 3rds doesn't always apply. nice one dude! |
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Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: Hougang
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thanks for all the postive comments..
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: singapore
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seems like the student is quite stressed by school work.
haha ![]() nice work nonetheless.
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Join Date: May 2005
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That is a great shot ! The blurred background really brings the student out. The part that the person is staring at is half-hidden, adding mystery to the shot... hence there is room for the viewer to explore... great work !
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Join Date: Apr 2005
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good concept, average execution. all it needed more was to have the upper opening more in view and perhaps a tad little overexposed to blow out the details.
the vastness of the room certainly overemphasizes the loneliness and opening represents hope in my mind. thanks. |
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