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Old 5th February 2007   #1
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Default How to make this photo better?

Due to the distracting red patch in the BG, I used chanel mixer to convert the BG to B&W. Seem like its lacking punch. How to make it better?

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You've got the original?
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You've got the original?
sure but not on this PC. its in my home's Mac.
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Old 5th February 2007   #4
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I took the liberty of using the same series in your another thread.



Sorry, going for meeting, done 2 min on the PS. It may have a little glitches, but you got the idea.

Hope you like it.

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Old 9th February 2007   #5
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Default Re: How to make this photo better?

more saturation and sharpenening in the interesting skirt, and less empty foreground, not unlike Andy's tighter crop.
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Old 10th February 2007   #6
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No lah. I did nothing to the crop. These are 2 different images of the same series.
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both are my photos.. hee. Newbie in photographing people.

I will try to give #1 some USM sharpenning and adjust its saturation.
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