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Old 4th February 2007   #1
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Hi,

a simple shot of a fallen flower here:


All C&C welcome...

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Old 4th February 2007   #2
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Old 5th February 2007   #3
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Some feedback leh...

Excuse the quality as the pic file's been compressed, hence the grainy look.
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Great Idea BUT focus is not sharp and also too much cropping - u can see the pixelation.
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Old 6th February 2007   #5
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Originally Posted by espion View Post
Great Idea BUT focus is not sharp and also too much cropping - u can see the pixelation.
Thanks for your feedback. Would the effect have been better if the cropping was reduced by a 3rd or 1/2 ?
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dont you think by posting such a pixelated and terrible quality image you are being unfair to the photo and yourself?
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Old 7th February 2007   #7
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Pic reposted.
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Old 7th February 2007   #8
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my 2 biggest gripes :
1. colours appear washed out.
2. image looks soft.

nitpicking :
1. ants can be photoshopped away.

try to make the subject pop out.
it will help to make the photo worth taking a 2nd look.
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Old 7th February 2007   #9
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Thanks.

Errrr, when you say the colours are washed out, do you mean that the highlights are burnt out due to over-exposure?

Thanks again.
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