Passionate

t-diddy · 4th February 2007

been a while since i post in the critique corner...
just one humble pic that i take from my friends wedding.

any C&C are welcome..

Rashkae · 4th February 2007

I don't know about the title... It doesn't scream "Passionate". More like "Prepared" or "Waiting for the moment". The angle is a bit odd too, i'd have preferred it without the mic stand and the people to the right.

night86mare · 4th February 2007

if anythign
the stuff in the background, like someone's head (at the subject's right shoulder)
i think a bag
and the mic stand
are very distracting

maybe you could move them away next time

babykailan · 4th February 2007

i think you are a very humourous guy.
this kind of expression you call it passionate.

however, not all is lost. more isolation will definitely help. picture also looks a bit soft.
but i think the overall mood is about there.

t-diddy · 4th February 2007

Hi tahnk you for the C&C.. i guess giving a name for your work isn't as easy as it looks.

. and about the mic i think i cant move that coz he is using it, guess hae to find a better angle next time then.

Thanx again for the comments.

4th February 2007	#1
t-diddy Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 359	Passionate been a while since i post in the critique corner... just one humble pic that i take from my friends wedding. any C&C are welcome..

4th February 2007	#2
Rashkae Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 8,312	Re: Passionate I don't know about the title... It doesn't scream "Passionate". More like "Prepared" or "Waiting for the moment". The angle is a bit odd too, i'd have preferred it without the mic stand and the people to the right.

4th February 2007	#3
night86mare Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: in your mind Posts: 19,357	Re: Passionate if anythign the stuff in the background, like someone's head (at the subject's right shoulder) i think a bag and the mic stand are very distracting maybe you could move them away next time __________________ Gallery \| Dreamscapes 09 Pentaxian 伪君子之所以更可憎

4th February 2007	#4
babykailan Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 951	Re: Passionate i think you are a very humourous guy. this kind of expression you call it passionate. however, not all is lost. more isolation will definitely help. picture also looks a bit soft. but i think the overall mood is about there. __________________ Canon 5D 17-40L 24-105L 50L Flickr \| Buy Baobao's photobook! Last edited by babykailan; 4th February 2007 at 06:28 PM.

4th February 2007	#5
t-diddy Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 359	Re: Passionate Hi tahnk you for the C&C.. i guess giving a name for your work isn't as easy as it looks. . and about the mic i think i cant move that coz he is using it, guess hae to find a better angle next time then. Thanx again for the comments.