Danger

eel · 2nd February 2007

Too obvious? Comments and suggestions welcome.

limyouliang · 2nd February 2007

my eye first look at the red then the main object.... or red is ur main object???? nvm nice try....

cheekiang · 2nd February 2007

does your red background means 'danger'???

hoho....nice try....

chee kiang

eikin · 3rd February 2007

good use of rectilinear shapes to lead the viewer to the warning signboard, and the connection of the red colour is commendable. however there's nothing much beyond the superficial shape and colours to make a meaningful abstract.

eel · 5th February 2007

limyouliang : Yes, that's part of what I intended.

cheekiang : Getting warmer.

eikin : Quite right - I felt something lacking too. Any suggestions to make this more meaningful?

eikin · 5th February 2007

Originally Posted by eel

eikin : Quite right - I felt something lacking too. Any suggestions to make this more meaningful?

nope. you can't force a shot to look what it is not. shoot more

espion · 9th February 2007

may work as a study in textures and light: contrast the rough red against the grainy black. But you need perfect alignment of the horizontal and vertical and you have to patch or crop away the entire danger sign as it is too distracting for such a minimalist approach.

eel · 9th February 2007

Thanks espion, that's something I can explore

XiaoMiaoWang · 11th February 2007

strong contrast on colors make the picture. Otherwise, the black box is a little lop-sided...

2nd February 2007	#1
eel Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Thomson Posts: 825	Danger Too obvious? Comments and suggestions welcome.

2nd February 2007	#2
limyouliang Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Bukit Panjang Posts: 175	Re: Danger my eye first look at the red then the main object.... or red is ur main object???? nvm nice try.... __________________ Im just a Newbie... Please don't flame mi ..:D

2nd February 2007	#3
cheekiang Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 128	Re: Danger does your red background means 'danger'??? hoho....nice try.... chee kiang __________________ Canon IXUS 850 / Canon EOS 400D 18mm-55mm Kit Lens

3rd February 2007	#4
eikin Moderator Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: 東京 Tokyo Posts: 10,920	Re: Danger good use of rectilinear shapes to lead the viewer to the warning signboard, and the connection of the red colour is commendable. however there's nothing much beyond the superficial shape and colours to make a meaningful abstract. __________________ APAD

5th February 2007	#5
eel Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Thomson Posts: 825	Re: Danger limyouliang : Yes, that's part of what I intended. cheekiang : Getting warmer. eikin : Quite right - I felt something lacking too. Any suggestions to make this more meaningful?

9th February 2007	#7
espion Deregistered Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 1,533	Re: Danger may work as a study in textures and light: contrast the rough red against the grainy black. But you need perfect alignment of the horizontal and vertical and you have to patch or crop away the entire danger sign as it is too distracting for such a minimalist approach.

9th February 2007	#8
eel Member Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Thomson Posts: 825	Re: Danger Thanks espion, that's something I can explore

11th February 2007	#9
XiaoMiaoWang Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Singapore, East Coast, Katong. Posts: 388	Re: Danger strong contrast on colors make the picture. Otherwise, the black box is a little lop-sided...