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    Default Danger



    Too obvious? Comments and suggestions welcome.

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    my eye first look at the red then the main object.... or red is ur main object???? nvm nice try....

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    does your red background means 'danger'???

    hoho....nice try....

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    good use of rectilinear shapes to lead the viewer to the warning signboard, and the connection of the red colour is commendable. however there's nothing much beyond the superficial shape and colours to make a meaningful abstract.

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    limyouliang : Yes, that's part of what I intended.

    cheekiang : Getting warmer.

    eikin : Quite right - I felt something lacking too. Any suggestions to make this more meaningful?

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    Quote Originally Posted by eel View Post
    eikin : Quite right - I felt something lacking too. Any suggestions to make this more meaningful?
    nope. you can't force a shot to look what it is not. shoot more

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    may work as a study in textures and light: contrast the rough red against the grainy black. But you need perfect alignment of the horizontal and vertical and you have to patch or crop away the entire danger sign as it is too distracting for such a minimalist approach.

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    Default Re: Danger

    Thanks espion, that's something I can explore

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    Default Re: Danger

    strong contrast on colors make the picture. Otherwise, the black box is a little lop-sided...

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