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Old 1st February 2007   #1
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Old 3rd February 2007   #2
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nothing interesting
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Old 3rd February 2007   #3
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composition - 0
focus - 0
colours - 1
title - 0
effort - 0

score - 1/5

0/5 - move into recycle bin, clear recycle bin.
1/5 - absolutely clueless.
2/5 - snapshot.
3/5 - probably worth improving.
4/5 - almost there.
5/5 - get out of here.
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Old 3rd February 2007   #4
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i'd beg to differ. it is interesting. nice detail for an abstract shot.

what is it?
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Old 3rd February 2007   #5
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i'd beg to differ. it is interesting. nice detail for an abstract shot.

what is it?
it's some decoration in elasplanade...
mabi u guys dun see the effect. my screen got some calibrating prob... sianz
i see on other screens it juz looks bright... it's suppose to be abit of back lighting so the colours are more contrasted....
or mabi my pix not pro enuf for the pros hehe
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Old 4th February 2007   #6
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Originally Posted by babykailan View Post
composition - 0
focus - 0
colours - 1
title - 0
effort - 0

score - 1/5

0/5 - move into recycle bin, clear recycle bin.
1/5 - absolutely clueless.
2/5 - snapshot.
3/5 - probably worth improving.
4/5 - almost there.
5/5 - get out of here.
Its a well done shot. Good abstract. Have more of it. Try boosting the colours up and play ard the artistic factor of this image.

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Old 5th February 2007   #7
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Default Re: leaves of another kind

Originally Posted by noob117 View Post
it's some decoration in elasplanade...
mabi u guys dun see the effect. my screen got some calibrating prob... sianz
i see on other screens it juz looks bright... it's suppose to be abit of back lighting so the colours are more contrasted....
or mabi my pix not pro enuf for the pros hehe
interesting installation, but how do you go about photographing an interesting installation?

you might want to consider some of the following thinking process ...

why do you want to take this shot?
is it because the installation is beautiful?
if so, how is the installation beautiful?
how then can you photograph the beauty of the installation?
which angle is good?
how much things do you think you need to put inside the frame to make that beauty apparent?
how much light do you think is needed to make that beauty apparent? (underexpose? overexpose?)

end of the day, know what you want to show and how to show it.
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Old 6th February 2007   #8
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u out to bring him to down??????
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Old 6th February 2007   #9
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u out to bring him to down??????
what do you mean?
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Old 6th February 2007   #10
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u out to bring him to down??????
huh?
bring me down?
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Old 9th February 2007   #11
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more exposure at the edges, more saturation for more vibrant colours and than the irritating wires .... needs lots of PS work to do that last thing but possible ... :-)
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Old 11th February 2007   #12
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well, its a good try nevertheless. I can see its been resized alot....
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Old 11th February 2007   #13
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ehhh.... nice colours?
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Old 11th February 2007   #14
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Originally Posted by schon View Post
i'd beg to differ. it is interesting. nice detail for an abstract shot.

what is it?
Same here. I find this pretty neat too.
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Old 12th February 2007   #15
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well, its a good try nevertheless. I can see its been resized alot....
yea resized alot.
from original to 640x480...
thanks for replies...
will work harder next time
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Old 12th February 2007   #16
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yea resized alot.
from original to 640x480...
thanks for replies...
will work harder next time
admire your attitude! jiayou! =D
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