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Join Date: Oct 2006
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nothing interesting
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composition - 0
focus - 0 colours - 1 title - 0 effort - 0 score - 1/5 0/5 - move into recycle bin, clear recycle bin. 1/5 - absolutely clueless. 2/5 - snapshot. 3/5 - probably worth improving. 4/5 - almost there. 5/5 - get out of here. |
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i'd beg to differ. it is interesting. nice detail for an abstract shot.
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mabi u guys dun see the effect. my screen got some calibrating prob... sianz i see on other screens it juz looks bright... it's suppose to be abit of back lighting so the colours are more contrasted.... or mabi my pix not pro enuf for the pros hehe ![]() |
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Its a well done shot. Good abstract. Have more of it. Try boosting the colours up and play ard the artistic factor of this image.
Last edited by Chris Lim; 4th February 2007 at 08:00 PM. |
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you might want to consider some of the following thinking process ... why do you want to take this shot? is it because the installation is beautiful? if so, how is the installation beautiful? how then can you photograph the beauty of the installation? which angle is good? how much things do you think you need to put inside the frame to make that beauty apparent? how much light do you think is needed to make that beauty apparent? (underexpose? overexpose?) end of the day, know what you want to show and how to show it.
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u out to bring him to down??????
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more exposure at the edges, more saturation for more vibrant colours and than the irritating wires .... needs lots of PS work to do that last thing but possible ... :-)
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well, its a good try nevertheless. I can see its been resized alot....
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ehhh.... nice colours?
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