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Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Singapore
Posts: 143
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This is a evening shot of Clarke Quay area from the swimming pool area of Merchant Court hotel.
CnC please. Thank you. ![]() Photo not edit yet. Thank you for your kind comments and critic. Last edited by SilverSurfer66; 1st February 2007 at 02:50 PM. |
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Join Date: Dec 2005
Posts: 414
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handshake....the photo looks blurr.
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 23
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Very, very nice. Do not see any "handshake", can read name of hotel in the distance.
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Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: 1 22 N, 103 48 E
Posts: 64
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looks quite nice, doesn't seem to look blur.
However, the subject of the photo is not clear. Is it the Novotel, the swimming pool, or the blue glowing letter at the left side? Also, I think the two persons standing on the left side of the pool seems a little bit distracting. Some cropping might make the picture looks nicer. Nice try though. Last edited by arantha; 2nd February 2007 at 12:21 AM. |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: Paya Lebar
Posts: 370
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is it my eyes or com ?
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Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Tampines.Sg
Posts: 126
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confused on subject. is it the pool? or competitor's hotel? food? waiter? ?????
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Join Date: May 2006
Location: Singapore
Posts: 271
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Senior Member
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: East
Posts: 10,962
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Shot wide open @f3.5... DOF is too lil for a good scenery shot.
You gotta try shooting @f11 or f16 for such shots... But you'd need a tripod as they should be requiring a longer shutter speed... ![]() |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 8,311
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1. Sky has no texture. It's boring.
2. Your focal point is the Novotel hotel. The pool, trees, etc are all soft. Corner softness is very evident in the top-right 3. There is no point at all to having the 2 waiters there 4. Too cluttered. What's the theme or subject? What's supposed to be the main subject here? It really looks more like a "for fun" snapshot a bored kid playing with his dad's cam would take. |
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Member
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Singapore
Posts: 143
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Thanks for your kind comments. Indeed I must remember to have good DOF wen shootng scenery. This photo was taken while I was having dinner at the poolside restaurant. I had no tripod with me, so I shot handheld with my 18-200VR with VR on - hence compensated some for camera shake.
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Member
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 464
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very well shot, great colors. I'd put this on a brochure if you ask me.
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