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Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 79
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![]() Any good? How could I have shot better? C n C pls. Last edited by funkydonkey; 1st February 2007 at 02:25 PM. |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: 1.45N 103.83E
Posts: 2,745
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IMHO, looks a bit soft.Bump up ISO and set aperture of f8 would be better. f5 is too shallow. This crowned crane looks better from the front. Try to wait for a better moment. The other bire in the BG is distracting.
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Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: TMC
Posts: 986
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Maybe should isolate the head more with a more homogenous bg. Otherwise may have to move the position such that the other crane is more obvious in the bg.
Also increase the contrast and saturation for the pic and apply unsharp mask. ![]() |
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 7
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i think it's better if u use under f 5 (shallow DOF). to make background more blur, to isolate the object from background. to create a more clear Point Of Interest.
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Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 79
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. What did you mean by Bump up ISO?? I do have a pic with the front..but it looks like the birdy had a bad hair day..damn. |
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