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Old 1st February 2007   #1
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Default Night Alley

shot with my 400D + 10-22mm
pls C&C to help me improve.
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Old 1st February 2007   #2
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Default Re: Night Alley

It's the wrong location entirely... Too clean, too bright. You want to shoot a "night alley", try the dark side streets of chinatown.
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Old 1st February 2007   #3
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hahaha... ok i get what you mean.
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Old 1st February 2007   #4
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Default Re: Night Alley

i think this photo is OK, composition also nice, but if you can move the car in the left to make the alley more clean. i think it would be better. and i think you should take the photo from center of the alley . IMHO
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Old 1st February 2007   #5
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Default Re: Night Alley

i agree that it should be cleaner....

i think if take from the middle...maybe the light from the building might not be that 'eye-catching'....

did you try to take from different angles???

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Old 2nd February 2007   #6
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eh yea.. but this is the one had a slight edge over the rest with the shiny black car adding some details. Thanks for taking a look and giving me your C&C guys.. i will keep working at it!
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Old 2nd February 2007   #7
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Default Re: Night Alley

did you PS the star lights? or do you have a starlight filter.

Can I post a backstreet pic here? too lazy to start another thread.
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