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Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 52
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shot with my 400D + 10-22mm
pls C&C to help me improve. Thanks!! ![]() |
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 8,256
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It's the wrong location entirely... Too clean, too bright. You want to shoot a "night alley", try the dark side streets of chinatown.
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 52
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hahaha... ok i get what you mean.
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New Member
Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 7
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i think this photo is OK, composition also nice, but if you can move the car in the left to make the alley more clean. i think it would be better. and i think you should take the photo from center of the alley . IMHO
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Join Date: Jan 2007
Posts: 128
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i agree that it should be cleaner....
i think if take from the middle...maybe the light from the building might not be that 'eye-catching'.... did you try to take from different angles??? chee kiang
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Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 52
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eh yea.. but this is the one had a slight edge over the rest with the shiny black car adding some details. Thanks for taking a look and giving me your C&C guys.. i will keep working at it!
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Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: Selangor D.E.
Posts: 1,417
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did you PS the star lights? or do you have a starlight filter.
Can I post a backstreet pic here? too lazy to start another thread.
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