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    Default My First attempt at Portraiture

    Hey all!

    I convinced my girlfriend to model for me in a very makeshift studio at her place (comprising of a white canvas and some clothes pegs ). Been popping around the forum a lot and I've read some really constructive comments on some of the photos, so I decided to brave the storm and upload some of my newbie photos too...



    I uploaded 2 other photos, but guess I'm not allowed to post more than 1 a week so... here are the links anyway!

    http://gallery.clubsnap.com/data/500/IMG_1867.jpg
    http://gallery.clubsnap.com/data/500/IMG_1867.jpg

    Comments and especially Criticisms please! Thank you!

    (Oh I haven't done any post-processing for the photos - cos I don't really know how to - so I'd really appreciate some tips too!)

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    Default Re: My First attempt at Portraiture

    1/2 face dun work
    can see nostrils, no good
    hand shake prominent
    spots detected

    overall... not a keeper.
    Logging Off. "You have 2,631 messages stored, of a total 400 allowed." don't PM me.

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    Default Re: My First attempt at Portraiture

    1 more thing, there's a stray strand of hair coming down across her eye, face.............

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    Default Re: My First attempt at Portraiture

    Quote Originally Posted by Del_CtrlnoAlt View Post
    1/2 face dun work
    can see nostrils, no good
    hand shake prominent
    spots detected

    overall... not a keeper.
    Hi Del_CtrlnoAlt,

    Thanks for the comments! I was just wondering, what spots are you referring to?

    And I just realised all the links link back to the same picture.

    Picture 2: http://gallery.clubsnap.com/data/500/IMG_1726.jpg
    Picture 3: http://gallery.clubsnap.com/data/500/IMG_1827.jpg

    Looks like I've got lots to learn!

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    Default Re: My First attempt at Portraiture

    You gotta work on the lighting more and the colors of the pics...very dull...just my 2 cents.

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