My newbie Shots

[Learn2Photo]

Taken with my D40 kit.

1. Sunshine



2.

[eikin]

please observe the critique corner posting guidelines http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=139941

1 picture per week, thanks

[chanmin]

hey , i like number 1, im a newbie too btw!...

would be better if there was ALOT MORE clothes being hung to dry and that one "extra" pole didnt steal the attention.

[Learn2Photo]

oops ...sorry abt that.

Well, difficult to find sunny day and LOTS of hanging clothing...hee...Anyway...just practising my shot.

Originally Posted by eikin please observe the critique corner posting guidelines http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=139941 1 picture per week, thanks

[J-Chan]

Originally Posted by chanmin hey , i like number 1, im a newbie too btw!... would be better if there was ALOT MORE clothes being hung to dry and that one "extra" pole didnt steal the attention.

hmm.. but without that "extra" pole, the pic would lack a point of interest..

[ziploc]

Hi Learn2Photo,

For picture #1, my opinion is:
- would probably be better if without the distracting elements of tree leaves and houses.
- could benefit from a deeper blue sky (using polarizer).

Cheers.

[Learn2Photo]

J-chan.. i didn't really take note of the sole bamboo pole sticking out...haha..now i feel abit awkward when looking at the pic

Ziploc...i think have to try from different locations, also the space between the walls and trees are very limited. 2) I also realized that the contrast somehow not up to std... but not sure how to PS it.