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Join Date: Apr 2005
Location: Bukit Panjang
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![]() Just brought my D50 and went down my house to take this pics..... pls give comment to improve... Thanks in advance..... ![]()
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Join Date: Apr 2006
Location: Bukit Panjang
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Placing the flower in the middle allows user to easily focus on. It would be better to use rule of 3rd so that the subject can interact with the background to create a story.
Perhaps you might wanna PS to bring out the red. It will create a better impact. Hope it helps, I'm also newbie armed with a D50. Hope to see more of your photos. |
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lol thanks bro.... lol u stay at bukit panjang too....
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Join Date: Mar 2005
Location: Singapore
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u get the first element of photography right....i.e taking an interesting subject...but art comes hand in hand with creativity, technical and science. Try arranging your subjects using different viewing point, equipment, angles, light etc. Most importantly, picture out what is it that the subject makes u interested to snap it down. U have shown it, the flowers, the colour, the shape etc.
Great start! |
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i live in BP too!
im 19 too! haha and i have a d50 too! nice shot btw. maybe some boosting of contrast to bring out the colour of the flowers would be better. but nevertheless a great start! regards, jizeng |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
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this picture can be taken in a portrait orientation and i think will look good. TS stays in bp? ![]() |
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Join Date: Dec 2006
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try a tighter crop... a square format.
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just go library borrow a book.....
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