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Old 28th January 2007   #1
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Just brought my D50 and went down my house to take this pics..... pls give comment to improve... Thanks in advance.....
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Old 28th January 2007   #2
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Placing the flower in the middle allows user to easily focus on. It would be better to use rule of 3rd so that the subject can interact with the background to create a story.

Perhaps you might wanna PS to bring out the red. It will create a better impact.

Hope it helps,

I'm also newbie armed with a D50. Hope to see more of your photos.
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Old 28th January 2007   #3
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lol thanks bro.... lol u stay at bukit panjang too....
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Old 28th January 2007   #4
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u get the first element of photography right....i.e taking an interesting subject...but art comes hand in hand with creativity, technical and science. Try arranging your subjects using different viewing point, equipment, angles, light etc. Most importantly, picture out what is it that the subject makes u interested to snap it down. U have shown it, the flowers, the colour, the shape etc.

Great start!
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Old 28th January 2007   #5
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Originally Posted by Maltese View Post
u get the first element of photography right....i.e taking an interesting subject...but art comes hand in hand with creativity, technical and science. Try arranging your subjects using different viewing point, equipment, angles, light etc. Most importantly, picture out what is it that the subject makes u interested to snap it down. U have shown it, the flowers, the colour, the shape etc.

Great start!
thanks
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Old 28th January 2007   #6
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Originally Posted by limyouliang View Post
lol thanks bro.... lol u stay at bukit panjang too....
haha yea~ next time, we can have fun shooting in BP.
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Old 28th January 2007   #7
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i live in BP too!
im 19 too!
haha
and i have a d50 too!

nice shot btw. maybe some boosting of contrast to bring out the colour of the flowers would be better. but nevertheless a great start!

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Old 29th January 2007   #8
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Originally Posted by Maltese View Post
u get the first element of photography right....i.e taking an interesting subject...but art comes hand in hand with creativity, technical and science. Try arranging your subjects using different viewing point, equipment, angles, light etc. Most importantly, picture out what is it that the subject makes u interested to snap it down. U have shown it, the flowers, the colour, the shape etc.

Great start!
well said!

this picture can be taken in a portrait orientation and i think will look good.

TS stays in bp?
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Old 29th January 2007   #9
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try a tighter crop... a square format.
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Old 29th January 2007   #10
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Originally Posted by tribal.snake View Post
try a tighter crop... a square format.
ok take noted....
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Old 30th January 2007   #11
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Default Re: First Newbie Photo

Originally Posted by ryuggen View Post
Placing the flower in the middle allows user to easily focus on. It would be better to use rule of 3rd so that the subject can interact with the background to create a story.

Perhaps you might wanna PS to bring out the red. It will create a better impact.

Hope it helps,

I'm also newbie armed with a D50. Hope to see more of your photos.
Sorie mmm... what is all the rule about...I am also new here.. Wher do u get all the rule from?...
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Old 30th January 2007   #12
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Sorie mmm... what is all the rule about...I am also new here.. Wher do u get all the rule from?...
just go library borrow a book.....
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Old 1st February 2007   #13
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Originally Posted by limyouliang View Post
just go library borrow a book.....
Thanks I will...
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