hooked on cigarette

[ovc17m]

Kindly give your constructive C&Cs on this photo, especially the composition and framing.

Thanks, still learning...

[zaxh81]

This pic seem soft,what lens did you used?

[bahibo]

for framing, i think let the line lower a bit,give more space above , ur pic dont seem to have any focus point , u want to focus on the white thing or the line ? Colour also a bit dull.

[grimicer]

the title is great, when i clicked, i thought i was going to see a photo with a youth smoking but this concept is good.

good eye, but photo seems soft.

[ovc17m]

Hi all, thanks for viewing & your comments.

Sorry for the softness, I guess it's due to my poor shooting technique & lousy PS. The actual photo seems a bit sharper. Think my PS makes it worse.

I'm using AF18-200mm F/3.5-6.3 lens btw.

Just like what my friend says, idea is nothing without execution.

[scaredcloud]

Originally Posted by bahibo for framing, i think let the line lower a bit,give more space above , ur pic dont seem to have any focus point , u want to focus on the white thing or the line ? Colour also a bit dull.

for framing, i think should b remained at this height.
as the white cigarette butt n the brown dried leave form a subtle visual balance.
if the wire was lower, then the leave will b cutoff.
juz a thought tho...

[Alpha Male]

Originally Posted by ovc17m Hi all, thanks for viewing & your comments. Sorry for the softness, I guess it's due to my poor shooting technique & lousy PS. The actual photo seems a bit sharper. Think my PS makes it worse. I'm using AF18-200mm F/3.5-6.3 lens btw. Just like what my friend says, idea is nothing without execution.

I think you can still use the unsharp mask on PS amount 100%, radius 0.4