Istana Park

madnessseek · 25th January 2007

Hi there.
It's my first try out and i wish to get some comment for improvement.
Thank you

Rashkae · 25th January 2007

Your white-balance seems off. And what's the main topic of the photo? The gate? Or the huge flower at the bottom-left?

Michael · 25th January 2007

i agree with Rashkae, too much going on here, no focus

Pablo · 26th January 2007

No real focus point. What is the main subject here

Just my

25th January 2007	#1
madnessseek New Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Singapore Posts: 4	The attraction of Istana Park Hi there. It's my first try out and i wish to get some comment for improvement. Thank you Last edited by madnessseek; 25th January 2007 at 03:19 PM. Reason: change og title name

25th January 2007	#2
Rashkae Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 8,256	Re: The attraction of Istana Park Your white-balance seems off. And what's the main topic of the photo? The gate? Or the huge flower at the bottom-left?

25th January 2007	#3
Michael Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Woodlands Posts: 706	Re: The attraction of Istana Park i agree with Rashkae, too much going on here, no focus

26th January 2007	#4
Pablo Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Blue/Green Planet Posts: 1,854	Re: Istana Park No real focus point. What is the main subject here Just my __________________ Time, is an effortless construction :)