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Hi all,
I took this photo by chance when I saw the Gotheborg at Vivo City. The girl had just finished fasterning the sail. Kind of like the expression of the girl, like she has sucessfully completed a task and is showing off to someone who doubted her ability.... Please give me you comments to improve. Thanks! For the entire mini series, its here. ![]() |
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sky dark??? photoshop or filter or natural one???
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i'm just a newbie... maybe just dunno where she looking at....
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Im just a Newbie... Please don't flame mi ..:D Last edited by limyouliang; 25th January 2007 at 05:50 PM. |
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Too much to think about,
What should I be looking at and why don't I ![]()
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The picture does not say the story, the expression doesnt match the legend
She looks tough enought to run the whole boat herself ![]() A bit too dark, which is not necessarily bad as it matches her toughness It is not clear where she is , a bit more of boat may be a good idea The flag could reinforce the over all feel of indipendence I wouldnt crop it out
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d r a m a Last edited by drama; 25th January 2007 at 10:38 PM. |
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Thanks youliang, I am not too sure what she was looking at too.....
Erm......din catch what you mean......can elaborate a bit more? Thanks. Ok, I do agree that she looks a bit diff from the story. HA! Yah, this is my feeling after viewing it at home.....was thinking of zooming into girl....thanks for the re-inforcement of my thinking, hope will do better next time. To view the position of where she is, gota view the entire series (which is linked in the 1st post). |
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