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Old 25th January 2007   #1
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Hi all,

I took this photo by chance when I saw the Gotheborg at Vivo City. The girl had just finished fasterning the sail. Kind of like the expression of the girl, like she has sucessfully completed a task and is showing off to someone who doubted her ability....

Please give me you comments to improve. Thanks!

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Old 25th January 2007   #2
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sky dark??? photoshop or filter or natural one???
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Old 25th January 2007   #3
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Hi youliang, PP lah....All I have with me was my D80 kit....not filter, nothing....if have filters, will be better

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Old 25th January 2007   #4
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Hi youliang, PP lah....All I have with me was my D80 kit....not filter, nothing....if have filters, will be better
oic..... not bad... ..
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Old 25th January 2007   #5
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Thanks pal, any tips to improve?? Thanks.

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Old 25th January 2007   #6
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i'm just a newbie... maybe just dunno where she looking at....
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Old 25th January 2007   #7
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Too much to think about,

What should I be looking at and why don't I
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The picture does not say the story, the expression doesnt match the legend
She looks tough enought to run the whole boat herself

A bit too dark, which is not necessarily bad as it matches her toughness
It is not clear where she is , a bit more of boat may be a good idea

The flag could reinforce the over all feel of indipendence
I wouldnt crop it out
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Old 26th January 2007   #9
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Thanks youliang, I am not too sure what she was looking at too.....
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i'm just a newbie... maybe just dunno where she looking at....
Erm......din catch what you mean......can elaborate a bit more? Thanks.
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Too much to think about,

What should I be looking at and why don't I
Ok, I do agree that she looks a bit diff from the story. HA!
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The picture does not say the story, the expression doesnt match the legend
Captain Hook??
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She looks tough enought to run the whole boat herself
Yah, this is my feeling after viewing it at home.....was thinking of zooming into girl....thanks for the re-inforcement of my thinking, hope will do better next time. To view the position of where she is, gota view the entire series (which is linked in the 1st post).
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A bit too dark, which is not necessarily bad as it matches her toughness
It is not clear where she is , a bit more of boat may be a good idea
Noted. Thanks for all your comments!
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The flag could reinforce the over all feel of indipendence
I wouldnt crop it out
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