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24th January 2007
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New Member
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: Singapore
Posts: 17
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Sounds of Dawn
 Would appreciate some feedback on the photo. Personally I have an affinity for it, the depth, sky and silhouette or maybe it brings back the memories. Cheers!  |
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25th January 2007
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Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 8,288
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Re: Sounds of Dawn
It's too dark and your horizon is tilted. I don't get a "dawn" vibe at all.
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25th January 2007
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Join Date: Dec 2005
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Re: Sounds of Dawn
doesn't match your title...
Hardly see what the guys play guitar.... |
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25th January 2007
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Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Khatib
Posts: 221
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Re: Sounds of Dawn
Maybe a tighter crop? I'd remove some of the space at the bottom. Just a thought..
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25th January 2007
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Senior Member
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: in your mind
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Re: Sounds of Dawn
I think the sky's fine
Maybe it's your nostalgia, but I cant' really see what the silouettes are making out Which sort of.. Makes it hard to feel anything from the photo other than "ah, yeah, there's shadows and a few guys" If you get what I mean, no offense meant |
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