|
|
|
|||||||
| Notices | ||
|
| Critique Corner Post your image in here to get serious and honest feedback from fellow photographers. Please read FAQ before posting. |
|
|
|
|
Thread Tools |
24th January 2007
|
#1 |
|
Member
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 269
|
'photosynthesis'
recharging in progress...
C & C are welcome   |
|
|
24th January 2007
|
#2 |
|
Member
Join Date: May 2006
Posts: 79
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
Very nice composition, make use of the place really well. And the title is really creative!
I think this pic can make a nice magazine cover cos its clean and got "feel", imagine the masthead(magazine name) is on top, the text on either side...can be very interesting. |
|
|
|
24th January 2007
|
#3 |
|
Member
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 464
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
agreed you used space very well. The would have been pretty nice as a straight horizon shot too.
|
|
|
| Sponsored Link |
|
|
|
24th January 2007
|
#4 |
|
Member
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: (NS9) Woodlands. Beep beep~~
Posts: 469
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
Bro, it seems that u are gettin better everyday~~~ Keep up the good work n progress~~~!! Wat ISO are u using btw? Feels a bit grainy to me... Mayb I need to change my specs... >..<
|
|
|
|
24th January 2007
|
#5 |
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: North
Posts: 2,596
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
nice one for the composition!
 Would be nicer if you stopped down your aperture further. |
|
|
|
24th January 2007
|
#6 |
|
Member
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Khatib
Posts: 221
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
Cool shot! Creative..
|
|
|
|
24th January 2007
|
#7 |
|
Member
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 546
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
Very nice shot! Would prefer it this way than a straight vertical shot.
However, might be even more absorbing if the gal is looking at the camera
__________________
Fashion | Creative | Art Nude | Weddings W: www.brandon.zenfolio.com | E: info@brandon-chang.com |
|
|
|
24th January 2007
|
#8 |
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 8,280
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
Nice shot...
But please be aware of the Critique corner guidelines... 1 pic a week, not per day. |
|
|
|
24th January 2007
|
#9 | |
|
Member
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 269
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
 thks my model who inspired me.. magazine cover..hm not a bad idea  |
|
|
|
|
24th January 2007
|
#10 | |
|
Member
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 269
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
 |
|
|
|
|
25th January 2007
|
#11 | |
|
Member
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: (NS9) Woodlands. Beep beep~~
Posts: 469
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
|
|
|
|
|
25th January 2007
|
#12 |
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2006
Location: Woodlands
Posts: 2,258
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
Nice shot my friend..
This pic has the "feel" in it and composition-wise I have to say I like it.. |
|
|
|
27th January 2007
|
#13 |
|
Member
Join Date: Apr 2005
Posts: 420
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
I love the title!
 |
|
|
|
30th January 2007
|
#14 |
|
New Member
Join Date: Oct 2006
Posts: 32
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
that light at the top kinda distract me a bit.
other than that.. |
|
|
|
31st January 2007
|
#15 |
|
Senior Member
Join Date: Oct 2005
Location: North
Posts: 2,596
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
But the light is supposed to be there in the first place right? No light... no photosynthesis!
|
|
|
|
31st January 2007
|
#16 | ||
|
Member
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: (NS9) Woodlands. Beep beep~~
Posts: 469
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
Sam~~!! Got anymore outing from you boh?? |
||
|
|
|
31st January 2007
|
#17 | |
|
Member
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 269
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
|
|
|
|
|
31st January 2007
|
#18 | |
|
Member
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 269
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
|
|
|
|
|
31st January 2007
|
#19 |
|
Member
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: East area
Posts: 712
|
Re: 'photosynthesis'
creative and i love it
|
|
|
 |
| Bookmarks |
| Thread Tools | |
|
