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Old 22nd January 2007   #1
legiz
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Default Some privacy pls

shh...absolute silence pls , no noise to go beyond the private room.

C & C are welcome

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Old 22nd January 2007   #2
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I'd have shot without the ugly doorframe... Just her, the "private" sign and preferably a spotlight falling right across the "Private" sign.
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Old 23rd January 2007   #3
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Originally Posted by Rashkae View Post
I'd have shot without the ugly doorframe... Just her, the "private" sign and preferably a spotlight falling right across the "Private" sign.
thanks for your comments
maybe i should have crop a little bit tighter.
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Old 24th January 2007   #4
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I would do a 1/3 crop down and 1/4 crop to the left. Door frames are just too distracting
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Old 24th January 2007   #5
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I'm fine with the door frame. It adds a 'raw' feel to this. Cute!
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Old 24th January 2007   #6
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Originally Posted by ndroo View Post
I'm fine with the door frame. It adds a 'raw' feel to this. Cute!
exactly how i feel! the old door is to make the pic looks abit 'rugged' look , maybe other pple prefer is with crop though
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Old 24th January 2007   #7
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Old 24th January 2007   #8
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Beside the white balance, it's really funny
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Old 25th January 2007   #9
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Originally Posted by stougard View Post


Beside the white balance, it's really funny
agree!
funny!

tighter crop with the head on the left, and a bit bokeh the private sign?
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Old 25th January 2007   #10
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Originally Posted by IfourDesign View Post
agree!
funny!

tighter crop with the head on the left, and a bit bokeh the private sign?
i should have ask her to stand closer abit the sign and a little away from the door
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