Thoughtful Nature

IfourDesign · 20th January 2007

Was having a photoshoot with my friend in my schs garden.
C n C.
cos gonna use this picture in my proj.
Thank you all in adv for taking the time to C n C!

kentfon · 20th January 2007

Nice

Good composition...i'm not a pro just my view

U fit the lens well

should have worn a t with nature slogan or something like that ..sori no offense hor kekeke

eikin · 20th January 2007

A. girl seemingly thinking = thoughtful

B. green palm leaves = nature

A + B = thoughtful nature

don't you think it's somewhat contrived?

for a start, what's the intention of this work, what do you seek to achieve?

borisi · 20th January 2007

the red thing in the middle of the pic kept me curious.
a bit more makeup (i'm clueless abt tis though) wont hurt.

IfourDesign · 20th January 2007

Originally Posted by eikin

A. girl seemingly thinking = thoughtful

B. green palm leaves = nature

A + B = thoughtful nature

don't you think it's somewhat contrived?

for a start, what's the intention of this work, what do you seek to achieve?

oh..
the photoshoot is for my proj, which is to redesign MNG spore website. I took a summer theme to the website, so i thought of taking a model wearing MNG clothes with nature bg.

and yes, i guess it is rather designed to be like that, a Thoughtful Nature.
Thx Eikin for your very in depth cmnt! =)

dRebelXT · 20th January 2007

The clothes doesn't represent MNG well. Viewers' attention is drawn to the skin tone
and the green leaves.
It's a properly composed and exposed photo, but won't do well in the project I think.

Rashkae · 20th January 2007

It does not, in the least, represent MNG to me. She doesn't look happy in her clothes. She's not showing off the clothes, just her face and the plants.

stbob · 23rd January 2007

Originally Posted by IfourDesign

oh..
the photoshoot is for my proj, which is to redesign MNG spore website. I took a summer theme to the website, so i thought of taking a model wearing MNG clothes with nature bg.

and yes, i guess it is rather designed to be like that, a Thoughtful Nature.
Thx Eikin for your very in depth cmnt! =)

Just a thought. The building in the background does not justify "nature bg". Perhaps you may want to frame your picture without any man-made structure inside, or just scout for another location to shoot.

Cheers

20th January 2007	#1
IfourDesign Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 190	Thoughtful Nature Was having a photoshoot with my friend in my schs garden. C n C. cos gonna use this picture in my proj. Thank you all in adv for taking the time to C n C!

20th January 2007	#2
kentfon New Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 47	Re: Thoughtful Nature Nice Good composition...i'm not a pro just my view U fit the lens well should have worn a t with nature slogan or something like that ..sori no offense hor kekeke

20th January 2007	#3
eikin Moderator Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: 東京 Tokyo Posts: 10,920	Re: Thoughtful Nature A. girl seemingly thinking = thoughtful B. green palm leaves = nature A + B = thoughtful nature don't you think it's somewhat contrived? for a start, what's the intention of this work, what do you seek to achieve? __________________ APAD

20th January 2007	#4
borisi Member Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tampines.Sg Posts: 126	Re: Thoughtful Nature the red thing in the middle of the pic kept me curious. a bit more makeup (i'm clueless abt tis though) wont hurt.

20th January 2007	#6
dRebelXT Member Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,563	Re: Thoughtful Nature The clothes doesn't represent MNG well. Viewers' attention is drawn to the skin tone and the green leaves. It's a properly composed and exposed photo, but won't do well in the project I think.

20th January 2007	#7
Rashkae Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 8,313	Re: Thoughtful Nature It does not, in the least, represent MNG to me. She doesn't look happy in her clothes. She's not showing off the clothes, just her face and the plants.