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    Smile Thoughtful Nature

    Was having a photoshoot with my friend in my schs garden.
    C n C.
    cos gonna use this picture in my proj.
    Thank you all in adv for taking the time to C n C!

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    Default Re: Thoughtful Nature

    Nice Good composition...i'm not a pro just my view

    U fit the lens well

    should have worn a t with nature slogan or something like that ..sori no offense hor kekeke

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    Default Re: Thoughtful Nature

    A. girl seemingly thinking = thoughtful

    B. green palm leaves = nature

    A + B = thoughtful nature

    don't you think it's somewhat contrived?

    for a start, what's the intention of this work, what do you seek to achieve?

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    the red thing in the middle of the pic kept me curious.
    a bit more makeup (i'm clueless abt tis though) wont hurt.

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    Quote Originally Posted by eikin View Post
    A. girl seemingly thinking = thoughtful

    B. green palm leaves = nature

    A + B = thoughtful nature

    don't you think it's somewhat contrived?

    for a start, what's the intention of this work, what do you seek to achieve?
    oh..
    the photoshoot is for my proj, which is to redesign MNG spore website. I took a summer theme to the website, so i thought of taking a model wearing MNG clothes with nature bg.

    and yes, i guess it is rather designed to be like that, a Thoughtful Nature.
    Thx Eikin for your very in depth cmnt! =)

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    The clothes doesn't represent MNG well. Viewers' attention is drawn to the skin tone
    and the green leaves.
    It's a properly composed and exposed photo, but won't do well in the project I think.

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    Default Re: Thoughtful Nature

    It does not, in the least, represent MNG to me. She doesn't look happy in her clothes. She's not showing off the clothes, just her face and the plants.

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    Quote Originally Posted by IfourDesign View Post
    oh..
    the photoshoot is for my proj, which is to redesign MNG spore website. I took a summer theme to the website, so i thought of taking a model wearing MNG clothes with nature bg.

    and yes, i guess it is rather designed to be like that, a Thoughtful Nature.
    Thx Eikin for your very in depth cmnt! =)

    Just a thought. The building in the background does not justify "nature bg". Perhaps you may want to frame your picture without any man-made structure inside, or just scout for another location to shoot.

    Cheers

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