sofa series

nntendo · 19th January 2007

oh well.
my first outdoor shoot. (canon 350d with kit lens)

still experimenting.
still confused.

what do you think?

eikin · 19th January 2007

what's your intention in producing this picture?

Big Kahuna · 19th January 2007

Originally Posted by eikin

what's your intention in producing this picture?

Ebay the sofa

Just kidding....I tot the picture will look better if you add in some wash out effect...make it older

Pablo · 19th January 2007

It looks like it needs someone sitting on her left, with a bottle in hand, just blabbering at her.

The bottle is raised about half his height and pouring into a glass, "missing most of it".

Oh yes, he is wearing a suit ( shirt not tucked in and buttons done up wrong).

My mind is on danger money at present so excuse my thoughts

babykailan · 19th January 2007

nothing outstanding to lift it out of the trash can.

this kind of shot needs ATTITUDE. there is none.

i suggest :

1. a tighter crop, the left side has to go.
2. an edgier treatment to the pic through pp.
3. a model that engages you, since the sofa cant do much except sit there.

keep shooting!

19th January 2007	#1
nntendo New Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 48	sofa series oh well. my first outdoor shoot. (canon 350d with kit lens) still experimenting. still confused. what do you think?

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eikin Moderator Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: 東京 Tokyo Posts: 10,920	Re: sofa series what's your intention in producing this picture? __________________ APAD

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Pablo Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Blue/Green Planet Posts: 1,855	Re: sofa series It looks like it needs someone sitting on her left, with a bottle in hand, just blabbering at her. The bottle is raised about half his height and pouring into a glass, "missing most of it". Oh yes, he is wearing a suit ( shirt not tucked in and buttons done up wrong). My mind is on danger money at present so excuse my thoughts __________________ Time, is an effortless construction :)

19th January 2007	#5
babykailan Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 951	Re: sofa series nothing outstanding to lift it out of the trash can. this kind of shot needs ATTITUDE. there is none. i suggest : 1. a tighter crop, the left side has to go. 2. an edgier treatment to the pic through pp. 3. a model that engages you, since the sofa cant do much except sit there. keep shooting! __________________ Canon 5D 17-40L 24-105L 50L Flickr \| Buy Baobao's photobook!