IronMan

makoy · 19th January 2007

Hi! Got nothing to do the other night took a shot of my friends collection..C&C please

Rashkae · 19th January 2007

it's cropped too much on the left, you chopped off the arm. Lighting and color contrast are all wrong, you might want to have tried a bounce flash or used warm/halogen lights and shot without a flash.

djork · 19th January 2007

picture frame in the background distracting

Jesmun18 · 19th January 2007

flat lighting, bad composition...
and focus on the chest?

centurion_sg · 19th January 2007

Got nothing to do, so commenting :P
There's this V shape thing from outer space attacking Ironman on the head

19th January 2007	#1
makoy Member Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 59	IronMan Hi! Got nothing to do the other night took a shot of my friends collection..C&C please

19th January 2007	#2
Rashkae Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 8,314	Re: IronMan it's cropped too much on the left, you chopped off the arm. Lighting and color contrast are all wrong, you might want to have tried a bounce flash or used warm/halogen lights and shot without a flash.

19th January 2007	#3
djork Member Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Hong Kong, Pokfulam Posts: 1,195	Re: IronMan picture frame in the background distracting

19th January 2007	#4
Jesmun18 Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 414	Re: IronMan flat lighting, bad composition... and focus on the chest?

19th January 2007	#5
centurion_sg Member Join Date: May 2006 Location: Singapore Posts: 271	Re: IronMan Got nothing to do, so commenting :P There's this V shape thing from outer space attacking Ironman on the head