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    Default The Security Guard on duty




    Was trying to make a picture story series out of a match I recently watch.
    Full series can be seen here :
    http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=252274


    C&C welcome

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    Default Re: The Security Guard on duty

    what is the two thing at the side??

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    Default Re: The Security Guard on duty

    Is it crop ??

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    I think this was shot at one of the entry to the gallery of National Stadium?

    It's security guard or policeman? Wanted to go catch one of the football match but too busy!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Love_sky View Post
    Is it crop ??
    only cropped a bit to correct the perspective line.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ovc17m View Post
    I think this was shot at one of the entry to the gallery of National Stadium?

    It's security guard or policeman? Wanted to go catch one of the football match but too busy!
    yeap. bingo.
    it's not a policeman i beieve.

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    I see the silhouette of a man wearing a beret
    Is he a guard, I dont know

    Is he looking at the sky?
    Why is the guard looking at the bright blinding overexposed sky
    Why is the sky there ?

    The two railings are distracting, crop it out completely

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    It works better when seen and read together with your commentary, like a photo essay. By it's own, it quite weak because the context is lost. My attention went to the bright spot in the sky and the cloud formations, the person/sillhoutte did not draw my attention.

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    Default Re: The Security Guard on duty

    Quote Originally Posted by newmemberz View Post



    Was trying to make a picture story series out of a match I recently watch.
    Full series can be seen here :
    http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=252274


    C&C welcome
    tis image in itself is flawed, cos i dun understand y u have to have 2 black patch in the picture which does not contribute anything but just a waste of space.

    the railing is a distraction esp it leads down to the black patch

    the part beside the guy is another distraction.

    overall, bad use of border and bad composition.
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    Default Re: The Security Guard on duty

    could losen the crop, the 2 little specks of stairhand railings are pretty annoying, it'll look better in a wider perspective

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