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    Default The book with memories

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    Default Re: The book with memories

    your post process is extremely bad.

    the people in the background look like spirits, the notebook look like a deathnote, the pen look like its floating in mid air, and i dunno where is the memories part except maybe its some unfulfilled task that cause them to linger around the deathnote.
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    Default Re: The book with memories

    Thanks Del_CtrlnoAlt.

    Please advise how I improve on the picture?
    Last edited by ryuggen; 15th January 2007 at 03:03 PM.

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    y don't u show us the unprocessed and we see what could be the best alternative
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    Let's see now...

    1. I would have used a better pen, like a mont blanc fountain pen. Not a cheap Popular ballpen with the price sticker still attached.

    2. The background is really really bad... Some simple blur would be much better.

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