Nice picture of the little girl
However, also agree with the others. Try cropping excess space on the right and the distracting pillar/curtain on the leftfor a tighter shot. A little off the top would not hurt as well.
More elbow would have been optimal...
Nonetheless, nice Sepia toned picture.
Do let us see your final post-processing result
By the way, did you use a flash or a reflector for the fill-in?
Looks like natural light from the window was reflected back onto the subject. Better choice, I think....or am I wrong
Nice sepia tone. I would crop off the left dark frame and remove excess space on the right. Still, its a pretty decent pic.