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    Quote Originally Posted by die-hard-nikonian View Post
    Decent shot with a nice control of flash to fill in the backlight. Compositionally, do take note of the excessive amount of headroom. So perhaps a little more of her elbows resting on the table would be good. Also do take note of the window frame cutting across the back of her head. Overall this is a good attepmt. Do keep practising and posting. Cheers.

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    Quote Originally Posted by die-hard-nikonian View Post
    Nice sepia tone on this girl's portrait. Will PS off the left beam and any other light remnants in the bg. Frame with a black frame. maybe write a few things on the left.

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    Nice picture of the little girl

    However, also agree with the others. Try cropping excess space on the right and the distracting pillar/curtain on the leftfor a tighter shot. A little off the top would not hurt as well.

    More elbow would have been optimal...

    Nonetheless, nice Sepia toned picture.

    Do let us see your final post-processing result


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    By the way, did you use a flash or a reflector for the fill-in?

    Looks like natural light from the window was reflected back onto the subject. Better choice, I think....or am I wrong



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    Quote Originally Posted by bernardy4416 View Post
    By the way, did you use a flash or a reflector for the fill-in?

    Looks like natural light from the window was reflected back onto the subject. Better choice, I think....or am I wrong



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    Dear Bernard,
    Nop i didnt use flash. Subject was side/backlighted, so i turned on the ceiling light. f2.8, 1/25, ISO100
    thx all for the comments.
    cheers

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    Nice sepia tone. I would crop off the left dark frame and remove excess space on the right. Still, its a pretty decent pic.

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