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    Default Rose

    Welcome C&C for my very first photo post at CS.
    Hope to improve my skills with all your constructive comments.


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    Default Re: Rose

    just a snap shoot.... nothing special.
    Need more creative composition, can try to shoot from different angle.
    Also, take note of the flash. it is too harsh.

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    Default Re: Rose

    are you using the a lens hood with internal flash?

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    Default Re: Rose

    erm...no.
    is act de SB400 external flash wif a diffuser.

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    Default Re: Rose

    Quote Originally Posted by Jesmun18 View Post
    just a snap shoot.... nothing special.
    Need more creative composition, can try to shoot from different angle.
    Also, take note of the flash. it is too harsh.
    Agreed with Jesmun. Not close enuff. Keep trying.

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    Default Re: Rose

    yea. thanks for yr comments.
    will keep on trying.

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    Default Re: Rose

    Its not in even focus, one half is dark, the other too bright
    You could try it without the flash

    The angle is not very intresting either

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    Default Re: Rose

    wat critique do u want to see for this image? i'll pm u my thoughts.

  9. #9

    Default Re: Rose

    at this range u should use the rule of thirds...it'll be slightly better^^

    shoot more, composition is the only thing we still can't automate

    happy shooting ^^
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    Default Re: Rose

    1) Get closer
    2) Open up your aperture
    3) And note your flash power. Try to use natural light if possible.
    Canon 5D mkII|24-105 F4 IS L|70-200 F4 IS L|135 F2 L|580EX|

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    Default Re: Rose

    maybe de composition n the exposure?

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    Default Re: Rose

    ok...thanks.
    will take note.

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