At Play

radedward · 26th December 2006

Don't really know if this works. Half of me feels that there's too much going on. The other half think it's the too much going on that makes the picture.

zaren · 29th December 2006

not bad...would have preferred more play/activity in the foreground to give the pic more energy.

heday · 30th December 2006

My 2cents, it may be better if u capture the expression of one or 2 person. Or the front view of the plastic sculpture.

radedward · 31st December 2006

Thanks all for the comments.

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not bad...would have preferred more play/activity in the foreground to give the pic more energy.

sadly, there wasn't anything in the foreground

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My 2cents, it may be better if u capture the expression of one or 2 person. Or the front view of the plastic sculpture.

True about the front view, but I was limited by my lens (35mm) in capturing expression on individuals, so went for the whole view.

26th December 2006	#1
radedward Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: East Singapore Posts: 487	At Play Don't really know if this works. Half of me feels that there's too much going on. The other half think it's the too much going on that makes the picture. __________________ Work: PicasaWeb \| Play: Animus3 \| Mobile: Tumblr

29th December 2006	#2
zaren Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 7,696	Re: At Play not bad...would have preferred more play/activity in the foreground to give the pic more energy.

30th December 2006	#3
heday Member Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 58	Re: At Play My 2cents, it may be better if u capture the expression of one or 2 person. Or the front view of the plastic sculpture. __________________ Film is a step back in time, but 10 steps ahead of digital.