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jasongcp · 21st December 2006

Originally Posted by TrailSeeker

sorry dude, compared with your previous shots, this one doesn't work for me. One major drawback i think is the tight crop... makes the 3 individual subjects seem very unbalance. The ambience colour is cool (Think that's your signature style I assume) You have great idea in telling story with help of the colour of the shots (speaking from comparing your previous 2 threads) I find dealing with 3 subjects in a same frame is not easy feat and I think this shot suffered due to that too.

jasongcp · 21st December 2006

I think if you can do with the 1st 2 subjects from the left... frame them up properly.. it might score due to the contrast the subjects have....

TrailSeeker · 21st December 2006

okie.. thanks for the comment.. I'll take that as a pointer..

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jasongcp Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Sengkang Posts: 269	Re: The readers I think if you can do with the 1st 2 subjects from the left... frame them up properly.. it might score due to the contrast the subjects have....

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TrailSeeker Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 611	Re: The readers okie.. thanks for the comment.. I'll take that as a pointer..