students and girl at parade

treeclimber · 19th December 2006

1. Students at Parade

2. Girl at Parade

TMC · 19th December 2006

and I see snapshots.

There is nothing to show the atmosphere of the event. 1 pic of event to show that you were there and 1 pic to show the girl that caught your eye.

Bobman · 19th December 2006

Where???

AReality · 20th December 2006

nice try..

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compro_1975 · 20th December 2006

Last Years NDP??? the girl is a teacher lah

treeclimber · 20th December 2006

Thanks for your comments.

why i took those pictures?
their facial expression caught my eyes

yes the picture was taken quite sometime back.
last year NDP??? probably you are right...i cannot recall.
she is a likely a teacher. i m not sure. you know her?

Del_CtrlnoAlt · 23rd December 2006

u took doesn't mean its not a snapshot.

anyway 1st pic is underexposed, which gives a dark feeling instead of a bright feeling of their smiles.

2nd pic, main subject is OOF so no matter how much merits does the smile make, it just doesn't seem to do the job anymore.

djork · 26th December 2006

are both snapshots? where are the pictures of the parade?

sehsuan · 27th December 2006

Positive. These photos date back from NDP 2005. Look at the design of the pass on the NSF...

fisheye · 28th December 2006

what's wrong with doing snapshots?
IMO, both shots have a pretty interesting composition and it's captured expressions well!

Canonised · 28th December 2006

Originally Posted by fisheye

what's wrong with doing snapshots?
IMO, both shots have a pretty interesting composition and it's captured expressions well!

there is nothing wrong with shooting snapshots .... however there are ORDINARY snapshots, GOOD snapshoots as well as ARTISTIC snapshots.... depend on which type you are aiming for.
IMO, the above are ordinary. TS should analyses the comments, and make room for improvement instead of defending oneself, but if the TS is satisified with the images, then juz ignore the comments given.

CYRN · 28th December 2006

Originally Posted by fisheye

what's wrong with doing snapshots?
IMO, both shots have a pretty interesting composition and it's captured expressions well!

Finding the proper title of the pics counts. Pic 1 titled students in parade, however I find almost all of the carrying Mac for lunch. Some playing, some walking, not co-ordinated. It feels more like a school's outing.

If it's expression you are going for... a closer crop would be nice. Cuz there's a lot of other distraction fighting for attention. Also, I tink the AF have focused on the boy in specs behind instead.

19th December 2006	#1
treeclimber New Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 12	students and girl at parade 1. Students at Parade 2. Girl at Parade

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TMC Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Beyond Space-Time Continuum Posts: 5,921	Re: students and girl at parade and I see snapshots. There is nothing to show the atmosphere of the event. 1 pic of event to show that you were there and 1 pic to show the girl that caught your eye. __________________ Selling: 32GB Thumbdrive - Patriot Xporter XT 120sgd (Price reduced)

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Bobman Deregistered Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Jungle Posts: 2,357	Re: students and girl at parade Where???

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AReality Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2003 Posts: 4,396	Re: students and girl at parade nice try.. . __________________ . The Visual Journalist

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compro_1975 Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: World Of Shawnograph Posts: 1,986	Re: students and girl at parade Last Years NDP??? the girl is a teacher lah

20th December 2006	#6
treeclimber New Member Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 12	Re: students and girl at parade Thanks for your comments. why i took those pictures? their facial expression caught my eyes yes the picture was taken quite sometime back. last year NDP??? probably you are right...i cannot recall. she is a likely a teacher. i m not sure. you know her?

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Del_CtrlnoAlt Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Outside the Dry Box. Posts: 16,342	Re: students and girl at parade u took doesn't mean its not a snapshot. anyway 1st pic is underexposed, which gives a dark feeling instead of a bright feeling of their smiles. 2nd pic, main subject is OOF so no matter how much merits does the smile make, it just doesn't seem to do the job anymore. __________________ Logging Off Permanently. Those who need to contact me will know where to contact me.

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sehsuan Deregistered Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Singapore Posts: 6,674	Re: students and girl at parade Positive. These photos date back from NDP 2005. Look at the design of the pass on the NSF...

28th December 2006	#10
fisheye Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: Melbourne, Australia Posts: 464	Re: students and girl at parade what's wrong with doing snapshots? IMO, both shots have a pretty interesting composition and it's captured expressions well! __________________ life in massrapid lightstalkers