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    love to have any comments you may have....thanks!


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    Default Re: marina bay vista

    please be reminded that posting of picture for critique is limited to 1 image per week for each member in Critique Corner http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=139941

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    Default Re: marina bay vista

    Nice shot.

    Perhaps try shielding the lens from the light source (street-lamp perhaps) from the top left. May eliminate the flare by doing that.



    Bernard

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    lens hood not with me...tot the flare was pretty cool tho unintended

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    No. I think the flare destroyed your photo. The photo is also a little too far right. Moving left to include more of the Esplanade grounds would be nice. The little bit of the walkway jutting out of the right corner is extremely distracting.

    Overall, a nice try, but needs improvement.

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    Agree with xray that the flare distracts from the main subject. Of course, one man's drink is another's poison...

    You could try positioning your left hand or a piece of cardboard (make-shift) to block the street lamp if you don't have a lens hood handy.

    Agree with xray that cropping the right side of the picture, plus giving the left more space may work out better.

    But that's just me...

    Hope this helps.


    Bernard

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    Perhaps try using the "clone" tool from Photo Shop to eliminate the flare and see if you like the results better....


    Bernard

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