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    Default Dining on the rocks

    took this shot at bintan banyan tree. pls critique, thks.[IMG][/IMG]
    Take a shot, freeze the moment.

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    Default Re: Dining on the rocks

    the signboard seems out of place here. otherwise, it's a good idea to keep the proportion of the dining furniture small in the frame to emphasize the environment.

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    Default Re: Dining on the rocks

    i like the picture, the composition is ok (although a little higher horizon would be desirable), the subject is good. however the lighting is flat and uninteresting. perhaps the colourful sky of the evening would have created a better effect.

    thanks.

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    Default Re: Dining on the rocks

    The signboard is fighting with your subject.
    Probably doing without the signboard would be better.

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