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So I found some dice lying around
![]() ![]() They were in a glass ![]() They stand tall ![]() My personal favorite ![]() Camera Canon S3is with tripod Minimal PP, just cropped & resized C&C welcome Last edited by drama; 8th December 2006 at 02:40 AM. |
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drama, please select 1 image for critique purpose. please read the Critique Corner posting guidelines as well http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=139941
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wow. amazing dice gymnastics.
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boring sets of pics...
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dont think that it's boring, something new as compare to those of models shoot, all different thread of the same girl.
TS: like your last photo tOo.. but how come got holes thru your dices one ah? |
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Thanks guys
![]() I had a hard time getting the lighting right, not sure if I have andrOo The dice had holes through them ![]() How do you like the concept? elkin c&c of the last pic, the rest are there only to lay the mood Last edited by drama; 8th December 2006 at 11:43 AM. |
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Hi drama, can share your home studio setup ? Quite impressive.
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My home studio, is very simple
A couple of old card board boxes, are my base A hardboard piece forms the top on which I have two white pieces of chart paper For lighting I use two emergency lamps, am working on a stand for those Hope this is useful ![]() Will send you a pic if you want Last edited by drama; 8th December 2006 at 02:40 PM. |
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I will need your emailid ![]() Androo Sounds good, will give it a try ![]() |
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maybe u might wanna try light painting then...
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interesting set. the 2nd pic can still be improved by adding more light at the bottom
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i think it's about time to implement Critique Corner's guidelines more strictly.
please be reminded that each member is allowed 1 post a week for critique. you have been reminded to read the posting guidelines already.
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[quote=drama;2678032]Androo
No luck shooting it in complete darkness But I got these ![]() [quote] Hmm.. means that the dice dont glow in the dark bright enough? How about using torchlight will light and concentrated beam to shine on the dice rather than a big patch of lights? |
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elkin:
Sorry, no critique needed on the last set Was just following up on androos suggestion androo: It's not reflective enough, I did take the second set with a flashlight It looks washed out with a concentrated beam on the dice DcnA: I will need to read up on light painting, not sure what it is jaredpogi: Thanks Will give it a try
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Hi eikin, i tot if it's a series, its ok? No? I know its not stated in the guideline, but I definitely read it some where in some one else Critic Corner thread....and everyone was fine with it....sorry if I am wrong. Just trying to clarify.
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in other words, the pictures in the series are created with the intention of being strongly linked to others in the series. for example a sports reportage, a well themed photo-essay etc. if the pictures are randomly, superficially or vaguely linked to one another, i believe it is hard to consider it a complete piece of work.
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Ok, thanks for the clarification.
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