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Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Tampines
Posts: 894
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Missed the first yawn, then the cat went back to sleep. Luckily, it woke up quite soon and I was ready to capture it's yawn. Comments?
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Senior Member
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Singapore
Posts: 4,280
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I kinda like how the tile lines lead toward the cat like that. perhaps if you cropped away some of the empty space to the left of the cat so that its not so center but more like 1/3 to the left?
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New Member
Join Date: Nov 2006
Posts: 25
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Fisheye effect would be perfect.
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Member
Join Date: Mar 2006
Posts: 1,516
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Classic! Needs to focus more onto the cats but not necessarily cropping off part of its body.
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Member
Join Date: Dec 2005
Location: Tampines
Posts: 894
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Member
Join Date: May 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 464
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great moment
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Member
Join Date: Apr 2005
Posts: 91
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i agree with raptor84. if you crop it from left and slight crop from bottom cutting off the tail and part of paws, you will have another entry/exit point in addition to the wall lines to keep viewer engaged a little longer.
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