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Old 3rd December 2006   #1
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Default Yawn!

Missed the first yawn, then the cat went back to sleep. Luckily, it woke up quite soon and I was ready to capture it's yawn. Comments?

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Old 3rd December 2006   #2
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Default Re: Yawn!

I kinda like how the tile lines lead toward the cat like that. perhaps if you cropped away some of the empty space to the left of the cat so that its not so center but more like 1/3 to the left?
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Old 4th December 2006   #3
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Fisheye effect would be perfect.
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Old 4th December 2006   #4
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Classic! Needs to focus more onto the cats but not necessarily cropping off part of its body.
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Old 4th December 2006   #5
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nice. funny too.
where was this taken? looks liek chalet at east coast
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Old 4th December 2006   #6
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Good guess, indeed it's there.

Originally Posted by noob117 View Post
nice. funny too.
where was this taken? looks liek chalet at east coast
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Old 4th December 2006   #7
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great moment
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Old 4th December 2006   #8
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Default Re: Yawn!

i agree with raptor84. if you crop it from left and slight crop from bottom cutting off the tail and part of paws, you will have another entry/exit point in addition to the wall lines to keep viewer engaged a little longer.

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