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    All that I can see
    Just this stick in the sea
    But it reminds me of something
    that I had to agree

    It reminds me that there is only one love...one life...

    Last edited by jusri; 3rd December 2006 at 09:07 PM.

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    Default Re: One

    I see rocks and floating debris other than that one stick. You may consider doing away with those to enhance the subject of the one stick.

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    Thanks!

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