At a Playground.

sophiandy · 30th November 2006

Appreciate your constructive feedback please.

sophiandy · 30th November 2006

Some information regarding this photo: -
Nikon D70s, AF 50mm f/1.8D lens, ISO 200, f/1.8 +0.7EV, no flash used, spot-metering.

Appreciate your constructive feedback, please.

eikin · 30th November 2006

this isn't the first time you posted in Critique Corner, please choose 1 out of the 5 to seek critique. thanks. Critique Corner Posting Guidelines

sophiandy · 30th November 2006

Sorry. My mistake. I've edited my posting. Appreciate your constructive feedback, please.

catchlights · 30th November 2006

You white balance is all over the place. so are the exposure, since you are shooting at one location, should locking the white balance and exposure by using custom WB and manual exposure mode

and the photo does not show the boy is enjoy himself at the playgound, more like a posed shot. shooting kids, don't have to always ask them look at the camera.

composition wise, nor far or near, placement of subject also nor here or there, kind of boring. if you can't shoot with prefer composition with active subjects, can always re-crop during the post.

30th November 2006	#1
sophiandy Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Melbourne, Victoria, Australia Posts: 119	At a Playground. Appreciate your constructive feedback please. __________________ "A teacher is never late; he arrives precisely when he means to." Last edited by sophiandy; 30th November 2006 at 07:46 PM.

30th November 2006	#2
sophiandy Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Melbourne, Victoria, Australia Posts: 119	Re: At a Playground. Some information regarding this photo: - Nikon D70s, AF 50mm f/1.8D lens, ISO 200, f/1.8 +0.7EV, no flash used, spot-metering. Appreciate your constructive feedback, please. __________________ "A teacher is never late; he arrives precisely when he means to." Last edited by sophiandy; 30th November 2006 at 07:47 PM.

30th November 2006	#3
eikin Moderator Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: 東京 Tokyo Posts: 10,920	Re: At a Playground. this isn't the first time you posted in Critique Corner, please choose 1 out of the 5 to seek critique. thanks. Critique Corner Posting Guidelines __________________ APAD

30th November 2006	#4
sophiandy Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Melbourne, Victoria, Australia Posts: 119	Re: At a Playground. Sorry. My mistake. I've edited my posting. Appreciate your constructive feedback, please. __________________ "A teacher is never late; he arrives precisely when he means to."

30th November 2006	#5
catchlights Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2004 Location: Punggol Posts: 10,760	Re: At a Playground. You white balance is all over the place. so are the exposure, since you are shooting at one location, should locking the white balance and exposure by using custom WB and manual exposure mode and the photo does not show the boy is enjoy himself at the playgound, more like a posed shot. shooting kids, don't have to always ask them look at the camera. composition wise, nor far or near, placement of subject also nor here or there, kind of boring. if you can't shoot with prefer composition with active subjects, can always re-crop during the post. __________________ Shoot to Live, Live to Shoot www.foto-u.com \| www.benjaminloo.com \| email