Red Rose, playing with PP.

Del_CtrlnoAlt · 30th November 2006

nit pik, your cropping too tight... leave some room for the stalk end. else just cut to make it look like never ending.

saturation is dull, need to push for the red to be vibrant. (but den my eyes insensitive to colors, just from the tone, i find it dull)

flash is too harsh...

lower right corner shows the round table end on your side... kinda distracting, althou its to show that its a round table.... i'll either have more of it, or nothing at all.

littlepea · 30th November 2006

Agree with Del_CtrlnoAlt on the tight crop.
also, i find the black centre piece quite distracting.

but i feel the problem lies with the composition of the whole pic. the rose is too centred. would have been better if the rose was near the bottom, leaving more space at the top.

juz my 2 cents.

if the purpose of this thread is on the photoshopped effect of partial colouring, then ok. its not bad.

versatile · 30th November 2006

Originally Posted by littlepea

Agree with Del_CtrlnoAlt on the tight crop.
also, i find the black centre piece quite distracting.

but i feel the problem lies with the composition of the whole pic. the rose is too centred. would have been better if the rose was near the bottom, leaving more space at the top.

juz my 2 cents.

if the purpose of this thread is on the photoshopped effect of partial colouring, then ok. its not bad.

Thanks guys. Noted and will improve next time. Anyway purpose of this thread was on PP effect.. hehe.

Del_CtrlnoAlt · 30th November 2006

Originally Posted by versatile

Thanks guys. Noted and will improve next time. Anyway purpose of this thread was on PP effect.. hehe.

u put in critique, we just slam everything & anything...

littlepea · 30th November 2006

i come in peace ^_^v

hahaha

SolBadGuy · 30th November 2006

better get slammed and improve than get political answers n get stuck in the same groove right?

i agree with the bros who have commented.. uneven lighting due to harsh flash and i have some issues with the table's edge n sudden cutoff of the stalk..

edit: typo from then to than.. was posting in class so had to be stealthy.. lol

littlepea · 30th November 2006

sister here. thankew

Del_CtrlnoAlt · 30th November 2006

Originally Posted by littlepea

sister here. thankew

hi cute sis... me cute boi... byez..

littlepea · 30th November 2006

versatile · 30th November 2006

SolBadGuy · 30th November 2006

Originally Posted by littlepea

sister here. thankew

haha.. ok.. my bad...

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Del_CtrlnoAlt Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Outside the Dry Box. Posts: 16,342	Re: Red Rose, playing with PP. nit pik, your cropping too tight... leave some room for the stalk end. else just cut to make it look like never ending. saturation is dull, need to push for the red to be vibrant. (but den my eyes insensitive to colors, just from the tone, i find it dull) flash is too harsh... lower right corner shows the round table end on your side... kinda distracting, althou its to show that its a round table.... i'll either have more of it, or nothing at all. __________________ Logging Off Permanently. Those who need to contact me will know where to contact me.

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littlepea Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tampines Posts: 218	Re: Red Rose, playing with PP. Agree with Del_CtrlnoAlt on the tight crop. also, i find the black centre piece quite distracting. but i feel the problem lies with the composition of the whole pic. the rose is too centred. would have been better if the rose was near the bottom, leaving more space at the top. juz my 2 cents. if the purpose of this thread is on the photoshopped effect of partial colouring, then ok. its not bad.

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littlepea Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tampines Posts: 218	Re: Red Rose, playing with PP. i come in peace ^_^v hahaha

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SolBadGuy Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 2,252	Re: Red Rose, playing with PP. better get slammed and improve than get political answers n get stuck in the same groove right? i agree with the bros who have commented.. uneven lighting due to harsh flash and i have some issues with the table's edge n sudden cutoff of the stalk.. edit: typo from then to than.. was posting in class so had to be stealthy.. lol Last edited by SolBadGuy; 30th November 2006 at 10:16 PM.

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littlepea Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tampines Posts: 218	Re: Red Rose, playing with PP. sister here. thankew

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littlepea Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tampines Posts: 218	Re: Red Rose, playing with PP. lol

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