Bokeh

lordsbm · 25th November 2006

My gf took this with the FZ7. C&C are most welcome.

Del_CtrlnoAlt · 25th November 2006

not bad but question is... wat is it?

eikin · 25th November 2006

the composition is particularly problematic as it cuts the frame into 2 equal halves, the right half looking rather empty.

signatures might be something of personal preference but i think black or white signatures with lower opacity works better than brightly coloured ones that try to compete with the subject for attention.

monyat · 26th November 2006

eikin, interesting analysis here, but how do you suggest to improve the composition? Rule of thirds?

Del_CtrlnoAlt · 26th November 2006

Originally Posted by monyat

eikin, interesting analysis here, but how do you suggest to improve the composition? Rule of thirds?

diagonally across would be interesting... but problem is i still dun get the idea what is that... i see flowers but its not in its entirety. using this angle, the subject just look very flat.

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